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Bab 29: Training Arc (Part 5.1)

*DAY 5 OF THE WEEK*

Esumi and Broly are currently on the way towards training ground 5. They decided to get there an hour earlier. Esumi never understood why Broly liked to come early, he seems more like the type to come whenever he wanted to. Esumi would definitely come whenever she wanted because she's a badass unstoppable kunoichi. Who dares tell her what to do and what not to?

What Esumi didn't know was that Broly would have agreed with her. He would come whenever he wanted, but Akira stomped that habit into the ground when he was small. She refused to feed him every time she caught him doing something wrong. He attempted to leave the orphanage and acquire food through other means but somehow Akira had some sort of sense for the legendary saiyan and could always tell when he was there or not. She threatened to never feed him again if he left the orphanage without her permission when he was in trouble. Normally the saiyan couldn't care less about what a feeble bug would say, but ever since his reincarnation into this world he was constantly around Akira. Apparently she left an imprint on the saiyan while he was young and it stuck firmly. Although he would never say it clearly and directly, He cared about Akira.

The two arrived at the training ground where Broly and Ko are to meet up with the sensei and their genin team. No one but them has arrived so far, but they did arrive an hour before the actual meeting time so no real surprise there. Broly and Esumi chose to try and attempt the body flicker jutsu with their elements since they couldn't do it in the crowded forest without crashing. Esumi was going to use her lightning chakra and infuse it into the technique, while Broly was going to use earth chakra and wind chakra with the jutsu.

Esumi changed her normal non-elemental chakra into lightning and did the single hand seal for the body flicker jutsu, Tiger.

Esumi shot faster than usual with the body flicker jutsu and quickly forced chakra into her feet to stop her suddenly rapid speed. This did not help her as much as she thought because all this did was tear off a small chunk of ground and cause her to lift off in the air spinning. She eventually started to laugh and yell in excitement as she was spinning in the form of a blue hedgehog. After spinning enough times, she started to lose momentum and landed perfectly on her feet. She gave herself a 10 and looked towards Aomatsuna. Broly simply nodded his head, causing Esumi to squeal in success. She returned back to Aomatsuna's side with the lightning body flicker, causing another *CRACK* to sound off. Although she missed her target by a few feet, at least she learned how to stop. Instead of trying to stick to the ground with her chakra, she decided to turn off the chakra fueling the lightning body flicker jutsu. A much easier solution now that she had experience.

Broly has decided to infuse wind chakra into the body flicker technique first instead of earth chakra. He made the Tiger hand sign and fueled the jutsu using wind chakra. Broly was suddenly missing. There was no sound made or any lingering presence that Broly was even there. Esumi looked around for the missing saiyan before feeling a tap on her shoulder. She instinctively slashed with her sword before realizing to late that she was slicing at Aomatsuna-kun! Broly grinned at his slave's response before slapping her wrist and making her miss her target.

"Not bad. In a few more years, you and Jabie will eventually be able to fight me at my full strength. I look forward to that day." Broly said with a terrifying voice that leaked battle spirit.

Esumi inwardly shivered at the thought of fighting Broly without holding back. He can stand up to jonin when he's just a genin that's just a few weeks out of the academy! It hasn't even been a year since they've been genin! She could probably only fight a weakened jonin and win with her strength. She needs to get stronger quickly, or she'll never be able to kill that snake bastard that took her little brother and mother from her.

Broly continued with his practicing. He infused hardened earth chakra with the body flicker technique and no change. Or at least no visible change that he could see or feel. He moved on to using liquid earth chakra or mud specifically and used it to fuel the teleportation jutsu. Broly also felt no change with this one. He felt slightly irritated. He thought that infusing chakra into non-elemental would always improve them, but apparently some non-elemental jutsus can't be taken over by certain chakra natures.

The meeting time was in 10 minutes and Team 11's sensei has arrived. He looked surprised at their early arrival. Since they never showed up for his team meetings he assumed they always slept through the time or didn't care. Apparently it was the second option.. He inwardly sighed at his train wreck of a genin team. They give no respect and care towards him.

"Good morning Aomatsuna-kun, Esumi-chan." Ko said politely.

Broly just nodded towards Ko. Esumi was still slightly pissed he pulled their first c-rank mission out of the village, but after Broly received those elemental exercises from him it was hard to stay mad at him. She also nodded towards him, mimicking Aomatsuna's response.

"Esumi-chan what are you doing here? I only called for Aomatsuna." Ko questioned nicely.

"I'm here to play with some genin." Esumi answered.

"I'm sorry to disappoint but only Aomatsuna will be with any other genin team. This is his punishment and will not be taken over by anyone. If you want to continue despite my words, feel free." Ko said.

Esumi was pissed off at her pansy wimpy sensei talking to her like this but glanced at Aomatsuna to decide if to listen to him or not. He nodded. Ko didn't miss this exchange and fumed on the inside. Is he the sensei or not?! His word should be the one that is followed. He didn't mention anything though because Esumi soon left after. Broly and Ko just waited in silence before Team 8 arrived.

A long black-haired woman wearing a red mesh armor blouse was leading the group. She stood in front of Ko and smiled. The three genin behind her were curiously looking towards half of Team 11. Aomatsuna looked at the three genin from Team 8 and looked back towards their sensei. He was wondering how strong she was. She didn't look very strong, but neither did his teacher and he was an annoying little fly in battle.

"So this is the so called prodigy of all the genin teams." The red-eyed sensei said while looking at Broly.

"I hope this will be an educational experience for my team Ko-san."

"Yes, I made sure to tell him of his role. Kurenai-san" Ko said making the genin of Team 8 confused.

Kurenai noticed the confused looks on her student's faces and decided to tell them of their purpose here.

"Team 8, I have gathered you all here to have a spar with a member of Team 11. You three will attack him as a team." Kurenai explained.

"Wait why is he by himself! Where is the rest of his team!?" A wild looking boy shouted.

"He is by himself because this is part of his training." Ko answered in place of Kurenai.

"He doesn't look that tough! I can take him on by myself." The wild looking boy boasted along with his dog barking in agreement.

"I'm sure our sensei has her reasons for why she wants us to attack as a team Kiba." The sunglasses wearing boy said.

"You're right Shino-kun. So go on you three. Make sure to do your best!" Kurenai said.

The wild looking boy known as Kiba charged forward close to the ground with his dog right behind him. His two teammates quickly followed after him. Broly stood and stared at the three as they dashed towards him. He was thinking about how to crush these 3 children as fast as possible while also following his sensei's instructions of showing them their good points and bad points. Even if he detests the man, he will stick to his own words. Maybe he should use these other genin teams as practice.

As Broly was in his thoughts, the boy named Kiba attacked with a leaping kick towards his distracted face. The kick landed and Kiba soon recovered from his jumping attack and looked towards his obviously knocked out opponent. He even started to laugh before fully seeing the results of his attack and payed dearly for it. Broly appeared in front of the laughing boy and grabbed his face. The boy's dog was biting at Broly's ankle to save his owner before being kicked away and knocked unconscious. This caused the dark blue-haired Hyūga and the boy named Shino to gasp in shock before contemplating on saving the struggling Kiba who looked absolutely furious after hearing his dog's whine of pain. He was clawing at Broly's arm while Broly was looking at the teenaged Hyūga girl and Shino with a baiting expression.

"Have you realized that you ran over your head underestimating me? Fools." Broly said before smashing Kiba's head into the ground multiple times, causing the ground beneath him to crack and crumble and the boy to yell and groan in pain before he finally fell unconscious.

The Hyūga girl's face turned serious and she activated her Byakugan and Broly couldn't tell what the hooded boy was feeling due to his face being covered up. But he heard some slight buzzing from his direction.

"Hinata. You attack him with your clan's taijutsu and I'll support with my clan's techniques." Shino said before the two started to dash off towards Broly.

"Hey don't you think your student is taking this too seriously!?" Kurenai yelled at Ko.

Ko sighed before maybe thinking this was a bad idea. He should've seen how the other jonin taught their students first..

"I'm pretty sure he held back. Your Inuzuka kid doesn't look that bad." Ko lied.

"He doesn't look that bad!? He'll be lucky if all his bones are still in place! I'm going to end this little show if another student of mine gets hurt badly." Kurenai threatens.

Hinata ran towards the muscular saiyan who wasn't even in a taijutsu stance. She attacked towards his chest with a forward palm. Broly, not wanting to repeat his experience with his sensei, grabbed the young girl's wrist and raised her in the air stopping her attack. The young girl expelled chakra from her tenketsu, an ability exclusive to Hyūgas, and forced Broly to let go of her and also cause his hand to turn slightly numb from the burst of chakra. The hooded boy appeared behind Broly and kicked towards the saiyan's jaw. Broly turned around nearly instantly and elbowed Shino in the face, causing Shino to explode into a bunch of insects that quickly latched onto Broly.

Shino was helping Hinata up as his bugs distracted the shirtless boy. As he finished helping her up, he sensed a majority of his bugs have just died. He was angry at the loss of his bugs, but outwardly showed no expression except for his fists shaking. Hinata took notice of this and patted Shino's back. He looked at her and noticed an expression that said "Let's take him down. Together."

Broly felt that the little bugs that were biting his skin were also draining his chakra. He was getting slightly annoyed so he surged some sharp wind chakra in his body and expelled it outside his body. Normally any average shinobi would not be able to do this unless they had a large amount of chakra and exceptional chakra control. If one thing went wrong in the process of attempting this technique would cause either massive lacerations on the skin from the sharp wind chakra or numerous cuts on the inside of the body. After Broly got rid of the bugs that encased him, he saw that the two were attempting another rush at him. He decided to end this because he was getting bored.

He appeared in front of the hooded boy and kneed him in the gut painfully. Hinata quickly and without hesitation palmed straight towards Broly's head while he was attacking her teammate. Broly swayed his head and soon came another palm. Unwilling to have a repeat from his when his sensei's attack constantly got faster and faster, Broly threw the bug boy into the next palm that came for him. The girl gasped in shock before stopping herself and trying to catch the hooded boy. She tripped over and both her and Shino tumbled away from the force that Broly threw Shino. She was exhausted and could barely move, but still attempted to get up and continue the fight.

"If that's all you're capable of, prepare to die!" Broly shouted before appearing over Hinata's grounded body and stomping his foot towards her head.

Broly looked towards Team 8's sensei to see if she was going to make a move, and he saw movement! He was getting excited at the prospects of fighting another jonin. He added a little more force to his foot that was crashing down towards the exhausted girl's head who stared straight at the foot with no signs of giving up in her eyes. The previous unconscious wild boy appeared in front of Hinata and kicked Broly in the chest, sliding him away from his friends.

The boy appeared ragged and completely out of breath along with his dirtied dog. Kiba enveloped his body in chakra and it started to change. His canines started to grow, his fingers and toenails grew into a claw-like appearance, and his eyes turned into slits. His white little puppy covered in grass and dirt jumped on his back. Kiba's chakra reached over into his dogs and *POOF* his dog turned into a clone of the boy! The two versions of Kiba started to run at Broly before spinning rapidly and turning into two drills that were tunneling towards Broly.

"TASTE MY FANG OVER FANG TECHNIQUE" One drill said.

Broly stared at the technique with interest. He could use this technique's idea for his own jutsus. He grinned as the two human drills came closer from the left and right side of him. Broly coated his hands in hardened earth chakra and grabbed the spinning tunnels. They shredded his earth chakra coating and caused him to skid back, but he easily replenished his earth chakra with his large chakra reserves and simply waited until they stopped spinning. He lifted Kiba and his clone. He was about to smash their heads together until he felt a sharp cold metal on his neck.

"You might want to put my student down. The battle is done." Kurenai warned.

Broly's tail curled around Kurenai's throat and started to choke her.

"You dare threaten me worm? Getting caught so easily as a jonin. Pathetic. Learn your place fool." Broly said.

The Kurenai Broly had by the throat with his tail faded away and so did the two boys in his hands. He was confused until he searched his chakra system and found a foreign chakra inside. He quickly expelled it out and found that he was trapped inside a genjutsu. Team 8 was safely behind Kurenai who was staring daggers into Broly and Ko.

"Well it was a nice spar wasn't it Kurenai-san. Whoa hey look at the time! We better get going!" Ko said while appearing next to Broly and body flickering away.


PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA
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I didn't really like this chakra all that much except for the body flickering part and Broly taking the ideas of the tunneling or spinning of Kiba's technique. So I'm gonna skip showing Broly's punishment and only show the results later on. So back to training and improving for the next couple of chapters.

Unless you guys really like seeing Broly stomp some kids, then I guess I can write some more for the other genin teams

Bab 30: Training Arc (Part 6)

*DAY 6 OF THE WEEK*

Jabie just got off work and was currently heading back towards his apartment grounds for more experimenting. He walked through the entrance of the apartment grounds and noticed two 5 Clones with 20 water clones continuing to experiment with the water clone jutsu. He walked over to get an update on the progress they were making. He was giddy in anticipation.

"How's the progress so far?" Jabie asked

"Well we're almost there. We managed to get rid of the power difference between user and the clone. So each water clone created has the full strength of the user, but not the chakra. Its still 1/10 the chakra of the user. The water clones can now move away from the user no matter the distance and the user can receive the memories of the water clones." 5 Clone #1 replies.

Jabie had trouble controlling himself and nearly jumped 10 ft in the air in glee. He did do a celebratory dance in front of the water clones. The water clones ignored him and continued to improve the water clone technique. After Jabie calmed himself down slightly, he shot out some water from his book bag that has a storage seal with 100 gallons of water inside it. He then proceeded to create 10 more water clones and make another two 5 Clones. After a two days of repeatedly merging 5 water clones, it no longer takes that much chakra from Jabie. It takes about a quarter of his chakra to merge two 5 Clones. He could try and make a 10 Clone, but he doesn't really see the point of it when his experimenting is going just fine as it is right now.

Jabie has decided to practice his mystical palm jutsu and chakra scalpel jutsu while his clones went to work. Although he doesn't have a live test subject or anything, he's not going to attempt that type of practice. He heard from Esumi about how they were training in their chakra natures and decided to also practice with it. He practiced with it all night long due to Esumi only telling him about it at night. But for some reason it was harder to turn chakra into water chakra than it was to turn other chakra natures from chakra.

He has read about how the second hokage was famed for his use of using water ninjutsu without being near a water source, but he just ignored that. It turns out there is something more than to just trying to convert chakra into the characteristics and properties of water. He continued trying for hours and hours as his clones behind him kept trying to improve the water clone jutsu. The sun was starting to set high in the sky by the time Jabie finally figured out the trick.

"MUAHAHAHAAHAH I'M A GENIUS!! SO THAT WAS IT THE WHOLE TIME!" Jabie shouted while laughing, startling his clones and making them look towards him slightly pissed for being interrupted during their experimentation.

"So it was due to me thinking too complex! Just thinking of the intricate properties of water such as transparent, tasteless, odorless, and nearly colorless chemical substance was too much for my chakra to understand! Just thinking it as simple water to drink, water in rivers, lakes, oceans is much more flexible for my chakra." Jabie thought to himself after finally converting his chakra into water chakra.

His options of what to do with his nature manipulation has increased immensely. He started to laugh in a manner that was somewhat similar to a genetically enhanced laboratory mouse with a name that rhymed with Prain.

"All the different properties and characteristics water could turn into… I could have Freezing water, Boiling water, and mist. I could even have my water chakra form into a sticky like substance like syrup or glue! So many options!" One of his water clones threw a water bottle at his head and promptly knocked him out in his mad scientist state.

"I thought he would never shut up!" 1 Water clone said as he continued to go through hand seals before promptly dissolving.

The rest of the clones were too busy testing to laugh at the lone water clone's joke.

*WITH BROLY AND ESUMI*

"Aomatsuna-kun are you sure this will work? It can't be this easy to create jutsus just because we have crazy badass chakra control." Esumi said a little bit unsure while she and Aomatsuna were back in the Forest of Death training together.

"Watch." Broly said before moving through some handseals and mouthing the words "Wind Style: Great Breakthrough."

He blew a huge blast of wind from his mouth and moved his hand forward and twisted it. This caused his jutsu that was just a blast of wind to twist and turn until it started spinning forming the shape of a drill. The jutsu roared forward as it pierced and shredded through several thick trees before stopping before the 5th one.

Esumi gaped her mouth open in shock! Then she squealed in excitement. Broly had a small smirk on the side of his mouth, due to being able to create his own techniques now. To be able to create a jutsu or modify an existing one the user has to be able to use nature transformation and shape transformation. Nature transformation is simply being able to change the properties of the chakra, while shape transformation is changing the actual form and movement of chakra.

"Awesome! Let me try!!" Esumi yelled before going through some hand signs and silently saying the words "Lightning Style: Lightning Ball jutsu!" and having 10 electricity spheres form around her.

She then opened her hands up as if carrying a huge ball and smashed her hands together and locked them. The electric balls mimicked the girl's hand motions and smashed together and tried to merge. Esumi added a little bit more force and *CRACKLE* *CRACKLE* an electric ball the size of an elephant flaring off yellow lightning every now and then was formed.

Esumi cheered and jumped around before having the huge electric ball smash into a tree. *KABOOOOOOOM* the electrical ball exploded and forced the top half of the humongous tree to fall when it smashed into the tree, taking along with it a majority of the bottom half of the tree. Broly smiled a saiyan smile at the new capabilities he will be able to perform now, while Esumi cheered even louder at the destruction she caused.

The two continued to modify their previous elemental jutsus throughout the forest until the sun started to set. Esumi was low on chakra and decided to head home. Broly continued to experiment and practice throughout the night in the Forest of Death. Esumi had a tired grin on her face.

She was too excited but at the same time so tired. Being low on chakra feels terrible when she could continue to create new techniques! But she knew her limits and going past her limits would definitely give her chakra exhaustion, preventing her from practicing new techniques for a week if she's lucky. Esumi was passing the entrance to their apartment grounds before seeing Jabie practicing with his blue chakra blades. She walked over to him and saw that it was more liquidy than before.

Jabie has just got done infusing water chakra into his chakra scalpel technique. But he doesn't know the exact differences between his water natured chakra scalpel and his normal one. Another thing to test later on. After Jabie awoken himself from his unnatural random decision to sleep in the middle of the day he started to experiment with his water chakra and start to infuse it into his previous jutsus. He created 5 new jutsus that were modified from his previous ones.

His first new jutsu was called Water Style: Mystical Palm Jutsu. It was a water natured version of his healing jutsu. He also couldn't test the difference with this one. His second and third one was his genjutsu techniques. He called them Water Style: Drowning Mirage Jutsu and Water Style: Water Surroundings Jutsu. These techniques caused the enemy to be trapped in a genjutsu. The first genjutsu caused water to surround the opponent's feet and suck them inside a very dark and deep water and would slowly be drowned in the genjutsu. The second genjutsu technique caused people to be unable to see water in their surroundings or see only water in their surroundings. His fourth jutsu was called Water Style: Water Flickering Jutsu. This jutsu was a modification of the body flicker jutsu and it allowed Jabie to be able to move at high speeds in water. And the last modified jutsu was the Water Style: Chakra Scalpel he just pulled off.

"Hey fat ass! What are you up too!!?" Esumi yelled, slightly causing the clones and the original Jabie to wince from her voice.

It also made Jabie lose his concentration and drop the new jutsu he just created, wasting water over his lap. He sighed in annoyance before choosing to answer Esumi.

"I was also modifying my current jutsus with my water chakra." Jabie answered.

"Well guess what Aomatsuna just found out" Esumi says in a playful voice.

"I have no idea what Aomatsuna-sama could have found out. Please tell me." Jabie said in a barely disguised voice of sarcasm and annoyance.

"I'll decide to tell you… If you cook breakfast for me tomorrow."

"Fine. I'll cook for you tomorrow, now tell me."

"He found out how to make jutsus! Kinda!"

"You're lying. Show me!" Jabie said before hopping up with soaking wet pants.

Esumi smiled before going through some hand signs and silently saying the words "Lighting Style: Lightning Ball Jutsu" and creating 10 electrical balls sparking with electricity. She then twisted her hand and the electrical balls turned into electrical drills! Jabie looked in amazement.

"No way. It can't be that simple!" Jabie said before turning around and grabbing a book that was titled "Chakra" He started to flip through some pages and landed on a chapter with the heading "Jutsu Formation" "To create a technique, two advanced chakra control methods are needed. Shape transformation and Nature transformation. Shape transformation is an advanced form of chakra control that involves changing the form and movement of chakra, determining the size, range, and purpose of a technique. Nature transformation is an advanced form of chakra control that entails the molding and defining of the nature of one's chakra, altering its properties and characteristics for use in techniques."

"Okay good. So it turns out all this testing wasn't for nothing. What you and Aomatsuna-sama did was using shape transformation to change jutsus. If you created a jutsu that wasn't previously made before then it would be truly mind boggling" Jabie says as he puts the book away.

"We can still create more jutsu! As long as we don't run out of ways to change how it looks and acts ya fat nerd head!" Esumi shouts.

"Yes, you are correct Esumi."

"I know I'm right dummy. And you're welcome!" Esumi says before walking to her apartment door.

Jabie realized that his list of things to do just increased even more with the info Esumi just brought and he smiled when she left. He turned to his clones and said

"More work clones. After we get this Water clone jutsu improved beyond repair, we have a lot of work ahead of us. For now, though I'll take care of modifying my water jutsus. Continue with your experiments." Jabie said as the sun as finally set and night time has come.


PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA
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The training arc is almost finished! Can you guys guess what is coming up next?! I'll give you a hint Team 7 is about to be finished with their B-rank mission!

Anyway Please rate, review, and comment! Please correct me if you notice any mistakes or plot holes i left so far!

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