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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I don't really understand the in the beginning but I like the mc though...Well i will read later chapters and see what happens... ... .. .. ..
I got to ch. 44 and we get some action but wow 40 ch. to describe the cultivar world and aspect and they diden't explain nothing , how dose it have a 4.8 i don't know.
I have just finished reading volume 1 of this novel. I think its a very nice original piece of work and I enjoyed the development of main character till now. In the initial chapters, it bothered me a bit that the kids were reckless but guess that's going to change as they get serious with cultivation. Hope to see more interaction between different characters as its solely focussed on the MC till now. Good work by the author!
I have been following this story from the beginning and the best thing I like about it is its originality. The characters are a bit weird to begin with but it seems they will grow and mature with the story. The story is going well till now and I can't wait to see the changes in MC and others. Overall I would say uts z very good work. I'll suggest more careful editing, though. Thanks for your hard work, author.
I really like this story character style, we got someone that really consider himself to be normal but clearly . i cant really rate this story 5 star because i have something that kinda bothers me. This is only a opinion from unqualified person to do critic really. The first 20-25 is really just a round about way to tell that our mc is lazy and just want a normal life. We got some introduction about the world from early chapter, hows the power work and etc. I dont know what kind of world is this, or maybe im just an idiot but i cant picture what kind a world is this, is this some kind of modern world with cultivation, or modern mixed with empire style kind, or the generic eastern style. And the character that i could follow and relate is the mc really. The other character is like not even a side character, more like background character. But nontheless i really like the concept and im following the story for sure. Just an opinion. Sorry for my whacky english.
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Well, this is for all the readers out there. I haven't got any comments on the recent chapters, so I request all of you to comment on what you don't like, or what is bad. That way, I can improve the story. Please review as well, which will point out my mistakes. As of now, I have 37k views, and out of those 37k people, just about less than 10 are giving comments and reviews.
Really need a lot of spacing dude.. Just full of words on my phones screen.. And thats annoying.. Hopefully u can edit that......................................................
I read it. Will be a follower for sure. Looking forward to more to be honest. Thanks for also rating my book. I guess we both have to thank Ayden.🤣 Also a quick question. How do u make a cover page?
Like it. You are one of two original writers i think have potential. I will support both of you. Too many fan fictions out there who in my opinion just steal other peoples stories and start a side story with it. I plan to find one more original story writer to support. Now 2 selected, one more to go. Both un rated so far so u have my support. I will ask the other author to also read yr book. Both of u are neck to neck on chapters. The other original story i follow is called the devil's weapon maker. You 2 shd support each other and feed and grow off each other in my opinion. Allow me to be the link.
Hey guys... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write reviews, 0 stars will also do, but, PLEASE write! I still haven't been given a star rating because of insufficient reviews! PLEASE!
This is my first work. Please support it and write good reviews. I promise it will exceed your expectations (I guess so). The story will surely get interesting. Please read, vote and give good reviews!
The main character looks interesting. The story seems to be developing nicely at the right pace. Looking forward to twists and turns full of humour. Way to go!
Great! This is the first chapter and it started with a fine amount of comedy! I believe that this will become very interesting in the future!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I don't really understand the in the beginning but I like the mc though...Well i will read later chapters and see what happens... ... .. .. ..
I got to ch. 44 and we get some action but wow 40 ch. to describe the cultivar world and aspect and they diden't explain nothing , how dose it have a 4.8 i don't know.
I have just finished reading volume 1 of this novel. I think its a very nice original piece of work and I enjoyed the development of main character till now. In the initial chapters, it bothered me a bit that the kids were reckless but guess that's going to change as they get serious with cultivation. Hope to see more interaction between different characters as its solely focussed on the MC till now. Good work by the author!
I have been following this story from the beginning and the best thing I like about it is its originality. The characters are a bit weird to begin with but it seems they will grow and mature with the story. The story is going well till now and I can't wait to see the changes in MC and others. Overall I would say uts z very good work. I'll suggest more careful editing, though. Thanks for your hard work, author.
I really like this story character style, we got someone that really consider himself to be normal but clearly . i cant really rate this story 5 star because i have something that kinda bothers me. This is only a opinion from unqualified person to do critic really. The first 20-25 is really just a round about way to tell that our mc is lazy and just want a normal life. We got some introduction about the world from early chapter, hows the power work and etc. I dont know what kind of world is this, or maybe im just an idiot but i cant picture what kind a world is this, is this some kind of modern world with cultivation, or modern mixed with empire style kind, or the generic eastern style. And the character that i could follow and relate is the mc really. The other character is like not even a side character, more like background character. But nontheless i really like the concept and im following the story for sure. Just an opinion. Sorry for my whacky english.
Membuka SPOILER Well, this is for all the readers out there. I haven't got any comments on the recent chapters, so I request all of you to comment on what you don't like, or what is bad. That way, I can improve the story. Please review as well, which will point out my mistakes. As of now, I have 37k views, and out of those 37k people, just about less than 10 are giving comments and reviews.
Really need a lot of spacing dude.. Just full of words on my phones screen.. And thats annoying.. Hopefully u can edit that......................................................
I read it. Will be a follower for sure. Looking forward to more to be honest. Thanks for also rating my book. I guess we both have to thank Ayden.🤣 Also a quick question. How do u make a cover page?
Like it. You are one of two original writers i think have potential. I will support both of you. Too many fan fictions out there who in my opinion just steal other peoples stories and start a side story with it. I plan to find one more original story writer to support. Now 2 selected, one more to go. Both un rated so far so u have my support. I will ask the other author to also read yr book. Both of u are neck to neck on chapters. The other original story i follow is called the devil's weapon maker. You 2 shd support each other and feed and grow off each other in my opinion. Allow me to be the link.
Hey guys... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write reviews, 0 stars will also do, but, PLEASE write! I still haven't been given a star rating because of insufficient reviews! PLEASE!
This is my first work. Please support it and write good reviews. I promise it will exceed your expectations (I guess so). The story will surely get interesting. Please read, vote and give good reviews!
The main character looks interesting. The story seems to be developing nicely at the right pace. Looking forward to twists and turns full of humour. Way to go!
Great! This is the first chapter and it started with a fine amount of comedy! I believe that this will become very interesting in the future!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.