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this is a simp fest be warned for a few chapters author goes on and on about the mc being an introvert I didn't mind that quite enjoyed it but then when he finds the people he keeps swearing revenge on he suddenly joins them whit a bs reason this author pulls out of his ass[img=angry] I don't mind hypocrite characters but the author take that too a new level maybe he's projecting his insecurities on the character? yea was fun fr like 30 chapters after that it belongs in the garbage 🗑️
Can’t tell if author is lacking in mental facilities or he just wanted make hate this novel.
good but mc idiot and arrogant he gets angry really quick i mean apocalypse happened one week ago . he is a chosen one and have unique skills if someone tries to kill him he goes to their camp and try to kill its like 1 vs 300 and his unique skill invinsibilty like dude in the camp theres 300 people + 2 chosen one and our mc goes righ in to the camp and gets trapped by normal people his reaction is how can a normal people figt h me bla bla bla he is plain idiot arrogant
You don't know how much I miss you😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁........................................ .............................................................................................
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An admirable sinister novel, cruel and bloody, the author transcends boundaries and breaks chains, it was fun moments throughout these 200 chapters, unfortunately every happy moment is destined to end
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First I likes to say thank you to the author for being able to create this book I definitely know how much stress doing this particular kind a of book does a quite a number on your mind. and now for the review the concept seems to be well thought out as well as so world creations pretty spot on with everything. character development on the main protagonist seems to going pretty smoothly although there's a couple bumps besides that it's a well-rounded character besides the moralistic Outlook. all right this is towards the the people that read the book and got to the part where mc took in a child and started acting kind I understand many of you didn't like this but you do realize this guy's not going to constantly be a sociopath even though most of the book has him constantly killing innocence and horrible people, also the author had pointed out this mc going insane or into a slow a abyss of madness. so I wouldn't say the things he do is out of character. Plus if you read the book further you would see how he actually treats her as well as the people around her.
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dman dude when u gonna aaaa Starrett writinggggg it was one of fav here evil cold ruthless all in one package what more can I ask forrrrrr aa
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The story tells bad side of the world, which is a bold move from the author since more people tends to like more positive approach. Some really complain about too much racism, but I think it's beautiful. The complexity of human heart, where people makes hypocrite judgement. The author also skillfully write the decisions that are chosen by the Nathan. Like from the latest chapters where we (readers) noticed the budding arrogance inside Nathan where he make a simple mistake by entering Fort Yano legally. Good character choice for uniqueness of the story, good character design, good translation, good world building, nice story development. Overall, it's a refreshing book to read mostly because of the protagonist. I really recommend this book for those curious about mad character. I also recommend my favorite part of the story, the backstory (The broken childhood friend), for you guys to read. I almost forgot to tell some of you what I picked up on this book. Pick the right woman and don't be a martyr, it may lead you to madness.
Finally a mc that uses his brain (most of the time if doesnt go insane) I have been pestered by my friend (ns66) for days. so i took the liberty to read this. and i would like to say, what a wonderful story.
if you are looking for a guide to 3rd world countries and what to expect this is it. I wish I had known all this before I moved to the Philippines because it would have solved a lot of problems. everything he describes about living in a brown skinned Asian country is true, so treat it as fact and thats coming from living and enduring the culture for 5 years. the zombie stuff is cool also lol.
It started off good like every other novel, It had it's own flaws at the beginning but most of them were easy to endure. That is until the author of this novel decided to forgo the only thing that made this novel special- or so to say "unique" and that is the evil character and messed up thinking of the protagonist. Him deciding to abandon a kid instead of murdering a very possible threat in the future is very out of character from him and doesn't make any sense, why you say? well let me explain you why, " I can't believe I could be so cruel to a literal kid " says the protagonist, duhh you killed a 6 year old not even 10 chapters ago what the **** are you on about?? All in all this novel would be a good yet stable 4/5 if not for the endless cliche the author decided to impose upon on us- the readers suddenly.
It’s a nice novel if you like villain male mcs but it has lots of things that you would expect and won’t expect. The main character reminds me of a leader of a evil apocalypse group that rules a city like a tyrant.
Good novel. However I hope the MC doesn’t regain too much morality and continues to be ruthless, maybe even passing this trait onto Zita. Also I want the MC to monopolise Artifact grade items and become OP while the characters around him develop slowly.
Tô ansioso pelos próximos capítulos e pelo desenvolvimento do relacionamento entre Nathan e Zita, não quero que ela traía ele novamente... E quero o anúncio da terceira fase também
Eu simplesmente amo esse universo e amo a personalidade de Nathan, acho que é pq eu vejo semelhanças dele em mim, mas ele definitivamente está entre os meus top 10 protagonistas
You introdue youre mc as an introvert then 1 chapter later he already abducted a person in his house you cant even make youre mc stick to his personality youre introduction is basically useless because you didnt even use something from it if i am you and i write a story like this i will be ashamed then kill myself dont even hope of having a future in this industry dont write another chalter it is a waste of time just go outaide and find a real work atleast you will a have real value to the society and not add more shit like what youre doing right now
First, a warning for any reader that doesn't like a main character that is an immoral psychopath: he ultimately becomes a rapist and child killer. I write this realizing that most people don't read reviews, they rely on stars or the author's own summary (as I did). This is the first dark piece of 💩 that I have had the misfortune to read on this site. However, people can read and write what they want. Just consider this fair warning. Second, the writing isn't horrible as there appears to be some level of editing. Spelling and grammatical errors are minimal, and if it wasn't for the content of the writing, I might have stuck it out. Third, if it wasn't for negative character development, there would be no development at all. The author clearly invested some effort in creating his characters and their backstories (more than most amateur writers), but the characters don't really progress beyond when readers first read about them. There are undoubtedly readers that like this kind of dark writing, but I'm not one of them. I don't really think that anyone psychologically healthy would enjoy it, but if you like psychopathic main characters that are insecure, unstable, and become child murderers and rapists, I guess that this novel is for you.
If you want more books like this that are actually good read everybody likes large chests, reverend insanity and my journey to godhood as a caterpillar
Finally a mc that uses his brain (most of the time if doesnt go insane) Also its an amazing story with a wonderfull world. With love My name eh jeff
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Hello, I would just like to point out 2 things: #1 - If you're expecting a happy-go-lucky story with a likable/lovable evil MC, don't bother reading this. Just don't. There is a REASON why I included the [No One 17 and Under Admitted] warning, and the [Evil Protagonist], [Mature] and [Tradegy] tags. I didn't add the warning and tags just for show. As a matter of fact, I even warn readers within the arcs/chapters if something really, really disturbing is going to happen. #2 - To those who posted some spoilers, please stop that. You're not the only one who's reading this novel. Don't take that privilege away from others. If you're going to share some spoilers, at least have the decency to turn on the spoiler option. That's all I have to say. Thank you.
this is a simp fest be warned for a few chapters author goes on and on about the mc being an introvert I didn't mind that quite enjoyed it but then when he finds the people he keeps swearing revenge on he suddenly joins them whit a bs reason this author pulls out of his ass[img=angry] I don't mind hypocrite characters but the author take that too a new level maybe he's projecting his insecurities on the character? yea was fun fr like 30 chapters after that it belongs in the garbage 🗑️
Can’t tell if author is lacking in mental facilities or he just wanted make hate this novel.
good but mc idiot and arrogant he gets angry really quick i mean apocalypse happened one week ago . he is a chosen one and have unique skills if someone tries to kill him he goes to their camp and try to kill its like 1 vs 300 and his unique skill invinsibilty like dude in the camp theres 300 people + 2 chosen one and our mc goes righ in to the camp and gets trapped by normal people his reaction is how can a normal people figt h me bla bla bla he is plain idiot arrogant
You don't know how much I miss you😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁........................................ .............................................................................................
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An admirable sinister novel, cruel and bloody, the author transcends boundaries and breaks chains, it was fun moments throughout these 200 chapters, unfortunately every happy moment is destined to end
Evil characters without morals, real fun, experts enjoy. 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
First I likes to say thank you to the author for being able to create this book I definitely know how much stress doing this particular kind a of book does a quite a number on your mind. and now for the review the concept seems to be well thought out as well as so world creations pretty spot on with everything. character development on the main protagonist seems to going pretty smoothly although there's a couple bumps besides that it's a well-rounded character besides the moralistic Outlook. all right this is towards the the people that read the book and got to the part where mc took in a child and started acting kind I understand many of you didn't like this but you do realize this guy's not going to constantly be a sociopath even though most of the book has him constantly killing innocence and horrible people, also the author had pointed out this mc going insane or into a slow a abyss of madness. so I wouldn't say the things he do is out of character. Plus if you read the book further you would see how he actually treats her as well as the people around her.
ayy yoo bro where tf are you bro? when are going to update? . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
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dman dude when u gonna aaaa Starrett writinggggg it was one of fav here evil cold ruthless all in one package what more can I ask forrrrrr aa
The auther die or what,,[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Good goo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo9ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Dark novel nice gggggggggoooooooooooddddddJkdkdbvskkshvdHbdn'sllpsoshvsvsoos
The story tells bad side of the world, which is a bold move from the author since more people tends to like more positive approach. Some really complain about too much racism, but I think it's beautiful. The complexity of human heart, where people makes hypocrite judgement. The author also skillfully write the decisions that are chosen by the Nathan. Like from the latest chapters where we (readers) noticed the budding arrogance inside Nathan where he make a simple mistake by entering Fort Yano legally. Good character choice for uniqueness of the story, good character design, good translation, good world building, nice story development. Overall, it's a refreshing book to read mostly because of the protagonist. I really recommend this book for those curious about mad character. I also recommend my favorite part of the story, the backstory (The broken childhood friend), for you guys to read. I almost forgot to tell some of you what I picked up on this book. Pick the right woman and don't be a martyr, it may lead you to madness.
Finally a mc that uses his brain (most of the time if doesnt go insane) I have been pestered by my friend (ns66) for days. so i took the liberty to read this. and i would like to say, what a wonderful story.
if you are looking for a guide to 3rd world countries and what to expect this is it. I wish I had known all this before I moved to the Philippines because it would have solved a lot of problems. everything he describes about living in a brown skinned Asian country is true, so treat it as fact and thats coming from living and enduring the culture for 5 years. the zombie stuff is cool also lol.
It started off good like every other novel, It had it's own flaws at the beginning but most of them were easy to endure. That is until the author of this novel decided to forgo the only thing that made this novel special- or so to say "unique" and that is the evil character and messed up thinking of the protagonist. Him deciding to abandon a kid instead of murdering a very possible threat in the future is very out of character from him and doesn't make any sense, why you say? well let me explain you why, " I can't believe I could be so cruel to a literal kid " says the protagonist, duhh you killed a 6 year old not even 10 chapters ago what the **** are you on about?? All in all this novel would be a good yet stable 4/5 if not for the endless cliche the author decided to impose upon on us- the readers suddenly.
It’s a nice novel if you like villain male mcs but it has lots of things that you would expect and won’t expect. The main character reminds me of a leader of a evil apocalypse group that rules a city like a tyrant.
Good novel. However I hope the MC doesn’t regain too much morality and continues to be ruthless, maybe even passing this trait onto Zita. Also I want the MC to monopolise Artifact grade items and become OP while the characters around him develop slowly.
Tô ansioso pelos próximos capítulos e pelo desenvolvimento do relacionamento entre Nathan e Zita, não quero que ela traía ele novamente... E quero o anúncio da terceira fase também
Eu simplesmente amo esse universo e amo a personalidade de Nathan, acho que é pq eu vejo semelhanças dele em mim, mas ele definitivamente está entre os meus top 10 protagonistas
You introdue youre mc as an introvert then 1 chapter later he already abducted a person in his house you cant even make youre mc stick to his personality youre introduction is basically useless because you didnt even use something from it if i am you and i write a story like this i will be ashamed then kill myself dont even hope of having a future in this industry dont write another chalter it is a waste of time just go outaide and find a real work atleast you will a have real value to the society and not add more shit like what youre doing right now
First, a warning for any reader that doesn't like a main character that is an immoral psychopath: he ultimately becomes a rapist and child killer. I write this realizing that most people don't read reviews, they rely on stars or the author's own summary (as I did). This is the first dark piece of 💩 that I have had the misfortune to read on this site. However, people can read and write what they want. Just consider this fair warning. Second, the writing isn't horrible as there appears to be some level of editing. Spelling and grammatical errors are minimal, and if it wasn't for the content of the writing, I might have stuck it out. Third, if it wasn't for negative character development, there would be no development at all. The author clearly invested some effort in creating his characters and their backstories (more than most amateur writers), but the characters don't really progress beyond when readers first read about them. There are undoubtedly readers that like this kind of dark writing, but I'm not one of them. I don't really think that anyone psychologically healthy would enjoy it, but if you like psychopathic main characters that are insecure, unstable, and become child murderers and rapists, I guess that this novel is for you.
If you want more books like this that are actually good read everybody likes large chests, reverend insanity and my journey to godhood as a caterpillar
Finally a mc that uses his brain (most of the time if doesnt go insane) Also its an amazing story with a wonderfull world. With love My name eh jeff
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.Weakling MC. What bad handicapp.
Hello, I would just like to point out 2 things: #1 - If you're expecting a happy-go-lucky story with a likable/lovable evil MC, don't bother reading this. Just don't. There is a REASON why I included the [No One 17 and Under Admitted] warning, and the [Evil Protagonist], [Mature] and [Tradegy] tags. I didn't add the warning and tags just for show. As a matter of fact, I even warn readers within the arcs/chapters if something really, really disturbing is going to happen. #2 - To those who posted some spoilers, please stop that. You're not the only one who's reading this novel. Don't take that privilege away from others. If you're going to share some spoilers, at least have the decency to turn on the spoiler option. That's all I have to say. Thank you.