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Could we please get more updates this is one of my favorites despite how short it is XoxoxoxoxoxoXoxoxoxoxoxoxoXoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Only 5 chapters is not enough for me to properly judge it yet, but so far so good, this story is quite interesting. The system seems like a fun character and the fact that both twins get to interact with the system is new. Only disappointing thing is the lack of updates, but I can understand.
Can't really say much since there aren't a lot of chapters at the moment. But really good so far👍👌🖒....... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I love what you are writing Can Sey. Hey guys! I love how you are supporting my older sister! Please support me too, I have a novel out called Doves, and Wisteria's. Please check it out!
Wow, this is a first. Not the system, seen that before, but two people having the same system? You caught my interest keep it up. ...........................
Could we please get more updates this is one of my favorites despite how short it is XoxoxoxoxoxoXoxoxoxoxoxoxoXoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Only 5 chapters is not enough for me to properly judge it yet, but so far so good, this story is quite interesting. The system seems like a fun character and the fact that both twins get to interact with the system is new. Only disappointing thing is the lack of updates, but I can understand.
Can't really say much since there aren't a lot of chapters at the moment. But really good so far👍👌🖒....... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I love what you are writing Can Sey. Hey guys! I love how you are supporting my older sister! Please support me too, I have a novel out called Doves, and Wisteria's. Please check it out!
Wow, this is a first. Not the system, seen that before, but two people having the same system? You caught my interest keep it up. ...........................
it is good 👍 i love it 😀 😍 and i would love to keep reading it
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