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please pickup and finish this novel i know it looks dead but it can be revived
Love this novel!! It has a bit of an issue with info dumps, but idm since I don’t play D&D.
Will this be picked again? Contrary to garbage novels that are translated nowadays, such good novel like this was dropped... shame; please pick it up...
I am at 150 chapter and i'm really disappointed. Mc has lawful evil alingment and has some dark past, but what does he do? Only killed people who first targeted his lil sister - check Everyone who targeted his sis is of evil alingment - check Didn't kill any human for his own benefits - check Didn't kill any woman - check Save random people on left and right - check Well if he is evil then 90% of people with good alingment should be evil too. Ahh i forgot he stole some silver to bury his dog in first chapter maybe he really is evil thief.
1 star for all the shameless * at the end of EACH $, the words are not even in the chapter, autor is just making chapter longer with non sens to get more money.
i will always be waiting for this to get picked up again if it dous get picked it was great and entertaining in every way only problem was grammar sometimes and cutoffs but people rectified that in comments so im still very sad that this amazing still hasn't finished and hope for a continuation
I spent a few days to get to chapter 530, although I always read this fast, this was actually a good story. Although you are flooded with dnd things such as levels and skills in the first part it starts to lessen and starts being like part of the story, basically, it doesn't make you want to skip it. The guy who said this story was bad b/c of information flood. Information flood stops if you read a bit and you will get used to it, and most of the time, most, it won't hurt to skip it. I admire how Soran, the protag, helps his sister at all costs, even planning to fight a god (not spoiler cuz it's literally in the first chapter). This isn't harem, although I have nothing against harems, Soran only has one girl up to chapter 530 and story doesn't forget her. Soran doesn't level up too fast or too slow, the pacing is pretty good. The world building is great, you will get used to the world really fast, and keep learning things after. I see few errors, and every characters personality is at least decent, even some characters that are not even important. The plot leaves you satisfied and happy, but the story doesn't do everything you would expect. Overall, this is just a wonderful story, also this is like first or second review ever on any site, so congrats to this great story!!
Dropped novel. The translation quality was terrible and in the ~400 chapters there is a point where it feels like many chapters went missing as the story from one chapter to another makes no sense and the characters ends up in a weird situation out of nowhere with nothing related to the previous chapter point.
It's an excellent story, but my vision I don't know what happened I just lost interest and like I was always seeing the very thing that got to a point where the story was empty for me I almost don't understand how the world works right, how people can get stronger, it's like the whole story is only focused on a single character than Soran, and one of the things I hate the most and the guy fate thing that is so cloying because it makes it look like everything should be that way it doesn't give you an idea that the character is alive or if his choices play out like a puppet game. The main character I know he must have already evolved in his personality but man I just know he's a cruel killer who only cares about a sister, by the way it's just that, it's like he's just gray he's just there to take drama, at first I felt he was alive, but now I feel he's a puppet who doesn't feel like it. Another problem and the sibling relationship is more like writing than anything else, as it does not demonstrate anything as an action, for example it does not demonstrate what they do, how their conversations are with each other or how far they go to help each other, I did not like the progress of relationship because it does not have, it is very described verbally. It's like meeting two brothers you do know them but very superficially. Give the illusion that what you deviate from as personality or relationship enhancement has happened a long time ago and that we are jumping from beginning to end. It's as if the author wasn't in the mood to write anymore and is just writing for the sake of writing just to finish what he started. Well that's it, I'm going to stop after reading about 300 caps, not because the story is bad because for me it lost its color and became empty. If you read this review I want you to know that I'm not a professional I'm just a tomboy locate in a bed writing how you feel about this story so I hope you understand
I really enjoyed this chapter because the MC has been building himself up to this point since the book began, and he found himself a resident of this world instead of a player
O livro é muito bom, segue um pouco do protagonista frio estilo Magus Warlock Word e Age of adeptos,assim como Gu Master. O problema é que após chegar no livro 2 - 3 você sente que as coisas tão um pouquinho rápido demais em relação ao poder de Soran, muitas vezes o MC repete e repete como ele é fraco e fraco extremamente fraco isso vai enganando você até que percebe o quão rápido ele evoluiu tipo WAHT? Felizmente isso é algo progressivo não do nada, é não comprometer a obra incrível
not bad, got a bit boring as it went though I feel like part of what was initally part of the story and made exciting was lost. ver nice otherwise
First I liked the story reincarnated in the body of another and taking care of a cute little sister. I thougt that after their escape the big brother would succed as an adventurer to earn money etc but the story takes an surprising twist. Because their both from the linage of the gods they get in the middle of the upcoming chaos. For my taste to cruel.
This the book that I most looked forward to being updated, hopefully they will start updating it again soon. I like the twists and turns that go on throughout the story.
me parece que esta muy bien narrada y es mas que entretenida, también a diferencia de otras novelas siento que no esta toda la novela idolatrando al protagonista si no que nos deja un buen desarrollo del mundo.
I really liked that the both brother and sister depend on each other back to back with the world against story development. And this novel is quite unique with the sister being more powerful than mc .
(rip my text accidentally deleted it. I'm talking about the sequel called super floating city. here's my rewrite the part about abyss domination.) I really liked this novel even thought I don't get the dnd combat system. the ending feels really rushed I really would like to see sauron fight asmodeus and defeat him and live happily ever after. (kinda happened I guest I wonder about his appearance on sequel could someone tell me about his appearance on sequel.) here's the things I kinda feel it could have more appearance on the novel. like become his companion,subordinate,friend,lover,allies. the dragon princess could have more appearance and help sauron and even potentially a lover. hes a loli dragon rip anyways. the girl with queen elizabeth bloodline named adelle. he could have some side stories you know about life of people of kingdom forgot name and some action about him having talks with nobles some fighting and his thoughts would have been better if it's someone else really hate that he almost gets no appearance after he get sent to the kingdom. and there's the girl that helped saulon the demonized body named xiang forgot name but I know first world is xiang he's a girl who forgot everything when he wakes up but remembers the name that demonized sauron have him km really sad about what happens to him from what I read he got killed by the lord of the arena?? go to novel update and check the comments about this novel his do called subordinate god the maiden of pain?? don't get appearance at all other than getting mentioned the halfling is in mordor I think in a tavern dancing and there's so much content that this novel can show yet the author probably isn't too much 3e guy ??? I don't play dnd thoe and the orc invasion could have more content man and I'm gone mention omg this thing s I'm gonna mention the sequel named super floating city now you're wondering how did I complete this novel it's because of machine translation stuff there's aperently 10 post script based on novel update while I only read 3 Im sure there's 10 because it's feels uncompleted the post scri** uncompleted I'm going to sleep now because I have a class today it's 12:00 now here I'm gonna continue this I dunno tommorow
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The story is nice and all but at some point in the story the mc is too nerfed lyk how can someone who has a system pale in comparison to his own sister and even with the system his strength is just so so. The story is great and all but since I have seen any growth in the mc even after chap 102 I think I will drop this. Thank you✌
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Why did they drop this novel it was about to hit a good curve again finally only to get dropped. Its an amazing ride but i cant suggest people read a half done novel. I’m sticking around for a month and I’ll write another review then.
Ok well where to begin. The novel is pretty good I cant really remember the beginning besides some info dumps for those that aren’t used to Dnd. The pace is pretty good and any slow spell is usually accompanied by some character growth that lets you get a feel for them earlier rather than later. The novel runs into the standard problem of systems with it restricting the writer so he just starts ignoring it until he needs a power spike. I’m not sure if its the author or the translator but rules will randomly get broken more and more often as the story progresses and the quality takes a dive with random paragraphs ending up missing leaving you going what the heck. I think this is also why rules get broken so often is because the translation doesn’t convey the real meaning of certain words. So basically first 300 are good then it starts to dive towards bad as you progress. Finally the translation isn’t complete yet there are no updates. The only way to read more is to spend twenty bucks, and thats not even the ending. The story is half complete and after spending money to read all of this at least give me the rest of the story in its original language machine translated or let some people online finish it. Overall I’d definitely try it but don’t get invested at least until the chapter start coming again.
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Does this novel dropped ? Webnovel should let this novel in Gravity Tales, even it is free, at least it wont get dropped. For those who spend coin on dropped novels, how you feel ? No new chapters for so long 😭
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please pickup and finish this novel i know it looks dead but it can be revived
Love this novel!! It has a bit of an issue with info dumps, but idm since I don’t play D&D.
Will this be picked again? Contrary to garbage novels that are translated nowadays, such good novel like this was dropped... shame; please pick it up...
I am at 150 chapter and i'm really disappointed. Mc has lawful evil alingment and has some dark past, but what does he do? Only killed people who first targeted his lil sister - check Everyone who targeted his sis is of evil alingment - check Didn't kill any human for his own benefits - check Didn't kill any woman - check Save random people on left and right - check Well if he is evil then 90% of people with good alingment should be evil too. Ahh i forgot he stole some silver to bury his dog in first chapter maybe he really is evil thief.
1 star for all the shameless * at the end of EACH $, the words are not even in the chapter, autor is just making chapter longer with non sens to get more money.
i will always be waiting for this to get picked up again if it dous get picked it was great and entertaining in every way only problem was grammar sometimes and cutoffs but people rectified that in comments so im still very sad that this amazing still hasn't finished and hope for a continuation
I spent a few days to get to chapter 530, although I always read this fast, this was actually a good story. Although you are flooded with dnd things such as levels and skills in the first part it starts to lessen and starts being like part of the story, basically, it doesn't make you want to skip it. The guy who said this story was bad b/c of information flood. Information flood stops if you read a bit and you will get used to it, and most of the time, most, it won't hurt to skip it. I admire how Soran, the protag, helps his sister at all costs, even planning to fight a god (not spoiler cuz it's literally in the first chapter). This isn't harem, although I have nothing against harems, Soran only has one girl up to chapter 530 and story doesn't forget her. Soran doesn't level up too fast or too slow, the pacing is pretty good. The world building is great, you will get used to the world really fast, and keep learning things after. I see few errors, and every characters personality is at least decent, even some characters that are not even important. The plot leaves you satisfied and happy, but the story doesn't do everything you would expect. Overall, this is just a wonderful story, also this is like first or second review ever on any site, so congrats to this great story!!
Dropped novel. The translation quality was terrible and in the ~400 chapters there is a point where it feels like many chapters went missing as the story from one chapter to another makes no sense and the characters ends up in a weird situation out of nowhere with nothing related to the previous chapter point.
It's an excellent story, but my vision I don't know what happened I just lost interest and like I was always seeing the very thing that got to a point where the story was empty for me I almost don't understand how the world works right, how people can get stronger, it's like the whole story is only focused on a single character than Soran, and one of the things I hate the most and the guy fate thing that is so cloying because it makes it look like everything should be that way it doesn't give you an idea that the character is alive or if his choices play out like a puppet game. The main character I know he must have already evolved in his personality but man I just know he's a cruel killer who only cares about a sister, by the way it's just that, it's like he's just gray he's just there to take drama, at first I felt he was alive, but now I feel he's a puppet who doesn't feel like it. Another problem and the sibling relationship is more like writing than anything else, as it does not demonstrate anything as an action, for example it does not demonstrate what they do, how their conversations are with each other or how far they go to help each other, I did not like the progress of relationship because it does not have, it is very described verbally. It's like meeting two brothers you do know them but very superficially. Give the illusion that what you deviate from as personality or relationship enhancement has happened a long time ago and that we are jumping from beginning to end. It's as if the author wasn't in the mood to write anymore and is just writing for the sake of writing just to finish what he started. Well that's it, I'm going to stop after reading about 300 caps, not because the story is bad because for me it lost its color and became empty. If you read this review I want you to know that I'm not a professional I'm just a tomboy locate in a bed writing how you feel about this story so I hope you understand
I really enjoyed this chapter because the MC has been building himself up to this point since the book began, and he found himself a resident of this world instead of a player
O livro é muito bom, segue um pouco do protagonista frio estilo Magus Warlock Word e Age of adeptos,assim como Gu Master. O problema é que após chegar no livro 2 - 3 você sente que as coisas tão um pouquinho rápido demais em relação ao poder de Soran, muitas vezes o MC repete e repete como ele é fraco e fraco extremamente fraco isso vai enganando você até que percebe o quão rápido ele evoluiu tipo WAHT? Felizmente isso é algo progressivo não do nada, é não comprometer a obra incrível
not bad, got a bit boring as it went though I feel like part of what was initally part of the story and made exciting was lost. ver nice otherwise
First I liked the story reincarnated in the body of another and taking care of a cute little sister. I thougt that after their escape the big brother would succed as an adventurer to earn money etc but the story takes an surprising twist. Because their both from the linage of the gods they get in the middle of the upcoming chaos. For my taste to cruel.
This the book that I most looked forward to being updated, hopefully they will start updating it again soon. I like the twists and turns that go on throughout the story.
me parece que esta muy bien narrada y es mas que entretenida, también a diferencia de otras novelas siento que no esta toda la novela idolatrando al protagonista si no que nos deja un buen desarrollo del mundo.
I really liked that the both brother and sister depend on each other back to back with the world against story development. And this novel is quite unique with the sister being more powerful than mc .
(rip my text accidentally deleted it. I'm talking about the sequel called super floating city. here's my rewrite the part about abyss domination.) I really liked this novel even thought I don't get the dnd combat system. the ending feels really rushed I really would like to see sauron fight asmodeus and defeat him and live happily ever after. (kinda happened I guest I wonder about his appearance on sequel could someone tell me about his appearance on sequel.) here's the things I kinda feel it could have more appearance on the novel. like become his companion,subordinate,friend,lover,allies. the dragon princess could have more appearance and help sauron and even potentially a lover. hes a loli dragon rip anyways. the girl with queen elizabeth bloodline named adelle. he could have some side stories you know about life of people of kingdom forgot name and some action about him having talks with nobles some fighting and his thoughts would have been better if it's someone else really hate that he almost gets no appearance after he get sent to the kingdom. and there's the girl that helped saulon the demonized body named xiang forgot name but I know first world is xiang he's a girl who forgot everything when he wakes up but remembers the name that demonized sauron have him km really sad about what happens to him from what I read he got killed by the lord of the arena?? go to novel update and check the comments about this novel his do called subordinate god the maiden of pain?? don't get appearance at all other than getting mentioned the halfling is in mordor I think in a tavern dancing and there's so much content that this novel can show yet the author probably isn't too much 3e guy ??? I don't play dnd thoe and the orc invasion could have more content man and I'm gone mention omg this thing s I'm gonna mention the sequel named super floating city now you're wondering how did I complete this novel it's because of machine translation stuff there's aperently 10 post script based on novel update while I only read 3 Im sure there's 10 because it's feels uncompleted the post scri** uncompleted I'm going to sleep now because I have a class today it's 12:00 now here I'm gonna continue this I dunno tommorow
Membuka SPOILER The story is nice and all but at some point in the story the mc is too nerfed lyk how can someone who has a system pale in comparison to his own sister and even with the system his strength is just so so. The story is great and all but since I have seen any growth in the mc even after chap 102 I think I will drop this. Thank you✌
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Why did they drop this novel it was about to hit a good curve again finally only to get dropped. Its an amazing ride but i cant suggest people read a half done novel. I’m sticking around for a month and I’ll write another review then.
Ok well where to begin. The novel is pretty good I cant really remember the beginning besides some info dumps for those that aren’t used to Dnd. The pace is pretty good and any slow spell is usually accompanied by some character growth that lets you get a feel for them earlier rather than later. The novel runs into the standard problem of systems with it restricting the writer so he just starts ignoring it until he needs a power spike. I’m not sure if its the author or the translator but rules will randomly get broken more and more often as the story progresses and the quality takes a dive with random paragraphs ending up missing leaving you going what the heck. I think this is also why rules get broken so often is because the translation doesn’t convey the real meaning of certain words. So basically first 300 are good then it starts to dive towards bad as you progress. Finally the translation isn’t complete yet there are no updates. The only way to read more is to spend twenty bucks, and thats not even the ending. The story is half complete and after spending money to read all of this at least give me the rest of the story in its original language machine translated or let some people online finish it. Overall I’d definitely try it but don’t get invested at least until the chapter start coming again.
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Does this novel dropped ? Webnovel should let this novel in Gravity Tales, even it is free, at least it wont get dropped. For those who spend coin on dropped novels, how you feel ? No new chapters for so long 😭
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it was great and i always looked forward to the updates.