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Urban Banished ImmortalFull-time AnomalyHacKerCheating Men Must Die I am the MonarchUrban Banished Immortal The Marvelous Dragon BallsDimensional SovereignMy RanchI am the MonarchI am the MonarchDimensional SovereignDimensional Sovereign
Pretty good story and I enjoyed the development of everything chapter very much. However chapters are not consistent and I do not know what is happening with the story; its been months. I hope to see the story starting up again very soon
Good story it makes me relaxed and laughed. I wish for the writer to have a good health so that he or she can continue with new updates.still waiting for the next updates
The best work of the moment, especially the MC that makes me laugh. It might lack a little bit of action but it is not detrimental in the end. Continue in your momentum.
Good story. The MC is kinda cute. The characters are nice. The grammar is good. Just try reading it cause i'm not good at writing reviews. Maybe you'll like it too. ..................................
This is one of the best original works on webnovels i really enjoy reading every chapter it litterly contains every aspect i wanted in a novel (hoped we would get a bit more detailed in the cultivation process but it honesstly doesn't matter at this point hehehe :p ) Keep up the good work :D .Great novel
im on chapter 2 and i gotta say its wayy too contradicting, like she woke doesnt know anything according to what you say and she got a "homey feeling" and then you say like they dont have a family name like whatttt if she doesnt know sht how tf does she have a conecpt of family name? its a good novel but you gotta take care of minor details
An eventful and catching story of a billion... no, 15 year old idi... smart girl. Watch as said girl stumps teachers, creates a kingdom with her friends, forgets everything important, causes headaches for the king and never fails to make you laugh.
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Good Read!! The 1st five chapters were a bit too wordy but I didn't want to give up as the story seemed to have loads of potential. Now I am so happy I didn't give up, right from chapter 6 it has had me on the hook. A refreshing story which defers from plenty others I have read or reading. Hope you go on to complete this novel without any hiccups and I would follow all the way on this journey. Cheers.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation This novel is so amazing, 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
It's a well written novel and I am so far enjoying it. It was a very pleasant surprise to find another good novel amongst the original selection. I can't wait for more chapters.
As of chapter 24. Story: This is the story of a powerful and confident but young and naïve alien girl who only wants enjoy life and her attempt to integrate into a magical human society. She is more familiar with the laws of the universe than normal humans, but still desires to conceptualize them the way a human would in her own mind. Very fun MC. Quality: The story has a rocky start with several chapters that are mostly exposition dum**. (Feel free to skip and skim these as they aren't necessary to enjoy the story if you are familiar with magic in fantasy.) Past this, there are some enjoyable, fun moments. There are some pacing issues and awkward sentences but the quality of writing improves as the chapters progress. Overall quality is above average for the original novel section.
This story is fun to read. It's the daily life of an OP MC with magic, academy, romance, family and friendship. This is one of most lovable MCs I have encounter so far. 😉
It's pretty good. I like it, I'll be reading and adding to library. The writing quality is really good, there was a chapter that was basically just info dump which was a little annoying, but apart from that it's a good story I hope to not see it dropped and looking forward to the rest.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Urban Banished ImmortalFull-time AnomalyHacKerCheating Men Must Die I am the MonarchUrban Banished Immortal The Marvelous Dragon BallsDimensional SovereignMy RanchI am the MonarchI am the MonarchDimensional SovereignDimensional Sovereign
Pretty good story and I enjoyed the development of everything chapter very much. However chapters are not consistent and I do not know what is happening with the story; its been months. I hope to see the story starting up again very soon
Good story it makes me relaxed and laughed. I wish for the writer to have a good health so that he or she can continue with new updates.still waiting for the next updates
The best work of the moment, especially the MC that makes me laugh. It might lack a little bit of action but it is not detrimental in the end. Continue in your momentum.
Good story. The MC is kinda cute. The characters are nice. The grammar is good. Just try reading it cause i'm not good at writing reviews. Maybe you'll like it too. ..................................
This is one of the best original works on webnovels i really enjoy reading every chapter it litterly contains every aspect i wanted in a novel (hoped we would get a bit more detailed in the cultivation process but it honesstly doesn't matter at this point hehehe :p ) Keep up the good work :D .Great novel
im on chapter 2 and i gotta say its wayy too contradicting, like she woke doesnt know anything according to what you say and she got a "homey feeling" and then you say like they dont have a family name like whatttt if she doesnt know sht how tf does she have a conecpt of family name? its a good novel but you gotta take care of minor details
An eventful and catching story of a billion... no, 15 year old idi... smart girl. Watch as said girl stumps teachers, creates a kingdom with her friends, forgets everything important, causes headaches for the king and never fails to make you laugh.
Membuka SPOILER Good Read!! The 1st five chapters were a bit too wordy but I didn't want to give up as the story seemed to have loads of potential. Now I am so happy I didn't give up, right from chapter 6 it has had me on the hook. A refreshing story which defers from plenty others I have read or reading. Hope you go on to complete this novel without any hiccups and I would follow all the way on this journey. Cheers.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation This novel is so amazing, 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
It's a well written novel and I am so far enjoying it. It was a very pleasant surprise to find another good novel amongst the original selection. I can't wait for more chapters.
As of chapter 24. Story: This is the story of a powerful and confident but young and naïve alien girl who only wants enjoy life and her attempt to integrate into a magical human society. She is more familiar with the laws of the universe than normal humans, but still desires to conceptualize them the way a human would in her own mind. Very fun MC. Quality: The story has a rocky start with several chapters that are mostly exposition dum**. (Feel free to skip and skim these as they aren't necessary to enjoy the story if you are familiar with magic in fantasy.) Past this, there are some enjoyable, fun moments. There are some pacing issues and awkward sentences but the quality of writing improves as the chapters progress. Overall quality is above average for the original novel section.
This story is fun to read. It's the daily life of an OP MC with magic, academy, romance, family and friendship. This is one of most lovable MCs I have encounter so far. 😉
It's pretty good. I like it, I'll be reading and adding to library. The writing quality is really good, there was a chapter that was basically just info dump which was a little annoying, but apart from that it's a good story I hope to not see it dropped and looking forward to the rest.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.