Bab 1: The Weird Rebirth
"Name: Ronald Jackson.
Age at the time of death: 22.
Cause of death: stabbed by a masked man for intervening when he tried to rob a middle-aged woman.
Character trait: generous, caring, brave, strong willed, loyal, friend loving, free spirited and happy go lucky.
Total lived: 99
Followed Good in life: 99 life times, KP[Karma Points]= KP+(Number of lives lived)*(Followed good in life)+CS[Continuous Streak]
Followed Evil in life: 0 times, KP= KP-(Number of lives lived)*(Followed evil in life)+CS
Total karma: 9999+
Overall life grade: SSS+.
Due to total karma exceeding the maximum possible for humans, special rewards shall be given."
As he heard that Ronald's mind was spinning as he tried to come to terms with everything that he was told.
The last thing he remembered was being stabbed by a thug after trying to stop him from robbing a woman followed by him bleeding out on the floor.
Now he's in what he can only assume is the afterlife but instead of the pearly gates and eternal bliss he was surrounded by absolutely nothing.
He didn't even have a body anymore, he was floating as a silver ball of light and he couldn't see who was talking to him only hear the voice ringing in his mind.
The voice continued as a holographic screen appeared in front of me with a progress bar currently at 0%;
"The progress bar will work as the amount of abilities, destiny and stuff you can carry with you in your next life. Just answer the questions in front of you. For every selected portion you will use 10-70% of you Karma Points depending on your answer. If you choose random as an answer, you progress bar will not be filled but you will be given a random ability or corresponding thing to the question.
At the end if you shall be given a special reward according to the completion of the progress bar.
Any questions?"
The voice stopped speaking and waited for my answer. It took some time but i replied as the words sinked in;
Me: "Yes! Just give a OP(overpowered) System cheat and let me go."
Voice in a slightly surprised tone: "Ho oh! Unexpected! Extremely unexpected! Normally when people die they are not able to accept that they are dead. You on the other hand are relatively calm. "
Me: "Should i make a fuss about it then?? And you didn't answer my question!"
Voice: "Hahaha! No, it's good not to make a fuss! It's good! And for the answer to that question, i'm sorry i already sol- *cough**cough* i mean i don't have such a thing so i can't give it to you."
Me: "You were about to say 'SOLD' right!!?? RIGHT?!?!?!"
Voice: "You are imagining it. Anyways let's get this over with!"
The holographic screen started to change and a question appeared;
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[Would you like to keep your memory of your previous life?]
[Yes/No]
Me: "Yes!"
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I answered almost instantly. Like why the hell would i want to forget something like that??
[10% bar currently filled. Except your memory related to yourself, every bit of knowledge will be kept in next life]
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[What world would you like to be reborn in?]
[Random/<Name of world>]
'Hmm.what does it mean which world?? Are there different worlds out there…...if i choose the world then the progress bar might get filled more than necessary and does this even matter which world i am born in? Let's go random!'
Me: "Random!"
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*Ding*
[10% bar currently filled. Random world selected! 'Naruto World' has been chosen at random!]
'Hmm….Hmmmmmmm!?!?!?! WHAT!!!!! I could choose as ANIME WORLD!!! @!&@^^#&*^#@!$@. No one told me this information!!! It's cheating!! I'll sue you, your company, or whatever it is!! Thank god i got Naruto world not some horror type anime world like 'Attack on Titan' or 'Blood C'. DAMN I'm lucky!!'
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[Please select what you want to be born as?]
[Random/<Name of Species]
[Special info: Possible Species are Human, Wolf, Snake, Monkey, Toad, Snail, Horse, Dog, Turtle]
'HOLY!!! Why would you even ASK SUCH A QUESTION!!!!!!!'
Me: HUMAN!!! HUMAN!!!!!!!! Please nothing other than a Human!!
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*Ding*
[20% Progress bar filled. 30% bar currently filled. Human Species Selected!]
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[Please select your Gender!]
[1. Male]
[2. Female]
[3. ???]
[4. Random]
'$#%$#$@$@#@%#$##^ WTH!?!?! What do you mean by ???!! who would select that!!'
Me: MALE!!! MALE!!
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[10% Progress bar filled. 40% bar currently filled. Male gender selected!]
'*pant*.....*pant*...that was a damn roller coaster!! Calm down man! *phew!!* '
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[Select Bloodline that you want to be born with in the next life?]
[Random/<Name of bloodline>]
[Special info: More than one Bloodline can be selected]
''hmmm….Now that's what you call a tough question. If i select a bloodline, i lose some progress bar, then selecting 2 might complete it and selecting at random i might not get any bloodline at all. Hmm….we should not be greedy, might need that progress later…..ok...let's do it!!....FINGERS CROSSED MAN!!'
Me: Random!!
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*Ding*
[40% bar currently filled. Random Bloodline selected! 'Nether-Wolf' Bloodline with 10% purity acquired!]
'What the HELL!?!?!?! BLOODLINES out of the naruto world are allowed??!!! Why didn't someone tell me this before!!!! I would have chosen Superman's bloodline or Saiyan Bloodline!!! DAMN IT ALL!!! And the purity is less too. Hmmm…what to do....let's think about it later'
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[Select Chakra Element!]
[Random/<Name of chakra element>]
[Special info: Only one type can be selected! Bloodline will generate different element to complement the selected element]
'Hmmm…..since it says bloodline will generate complementing chakra nature and only one can be selected, lets select one of the most awesome chakra nature.'
Me: "Space Element!"
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*Ding*
[30% progress bar filled. 70% bar currently filled. Space Element selected! Bloodlines generating a complementing element! 'NetherWolf' bloodline generated Nether Element and the Darkness Element! Unique Elements detected! When user can combine all the elements, user can create a new Kekkei Genkai!]
'HOLY MOTHER OF EVERYTHING THAT'S GOOD AND PURE!!!! I can have a bloodline limit!! My very own new bloodline limit!!! Hell yeah!! Hmm….just one element used 30% progress bar….bloodlines might have emptied me! Thank god i didn't choose a bloodline on my own. Well whatever'
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[Please select occupation of parents! First mother's, then father's!]
[Random/<Name of occupation>]
[Special info: Occupation can include Commoner, Anbu, Root, Ninja Elder, Kage]
'I don't have much progress bar remaining…...let's go with random!'
Me: "Random and Random!"
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*Ding*
[70% bar currently filled. Random selected for both! Occupation of mother is 'Tailer'! Occupation of father is 'Blacksmith'!]
'Hmmm…..what do you know! Out of luck...well whatever…..they will be my parents….'
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[When do you want to be born in the story? Also name the village.]
[Random/<Name the time around the person you want to be born with>]
'No need to think!!'
Me: "One week After the Nine-Tails attack on Hidden leaf!! In the hidden Leaf village!!!"
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*Ding*
[10% progress bar filled. 80% bar currently filled! Born in the hidden leaf village 1 week after the attack of the nine-tails!]
*Beep* *beep* *Beep*
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[Would you like to confirm it?]
[Yes/No]
Me: "Yes Please!!"
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[Confirming....please check!!]
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[World: Naruto World
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Bloodline: NetherWolf Bloodline with 10% purity
Chakra Type: Nether, Darkness, and Space
Parent occupation: Both Commoners; Mother's a Tailor and Father a Blacksmith
Time of Birth: 1 week after nine-tails attack in hidden leaf.(Naruto's birth)]
[Confirm?]
[Yes/No]
Me: "Yes"!
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Voice: "Congratulations!! You have 20% progress bar remaining! Select any abilities given below!"
[Select:
Any extra Element; cost 20% progress bar
Any extra Bloodline; cost 20% progress bar
Complete chakra control; cost 20% progress bar
Bloodline purifying pill- increases the bloodline purity of any bloodline in body to at least 90%; Cost 20% progress bar
Better sense of smell; cost 10% PB
Better sense of hearing; cost 10% PB
Better sense of touch; cost 10% PB
Better sense of danger; cost 10% PB]
[please select]
[Special info: Choices can be selected more than 1 time and the effect will increase!]
'After going through it like 20 times i choose only one thing'
Me: "I choose Bloodline Purity pill"
*Ding*
[Choices confirmed! Bloodline purity pill taken!! Bloodline is now at 99% purity! Due to highly pure bloodline, new bloodline Abilities Unlocked!
Higher Memory: IQ increased to 310! Can Remember everything seen or heard and apply in everyday life
???: Age of 2 required for partial release and age of 5 for full release.
???: Age of 2 required for partial release and age of 5 for full release.
???: Age of 14 required.]
Me: "Nonononono!! New bloodline abilities which are '???'!! WTH!?!?! Just what exactly is a Nether-Wolf???"
Voice: "A Nether-wolf is a creature born of a Werewolf and HellHound with like a chance of 1 in a billion and a NetherWolf that lives past 5 is even rare as its meat can make you immortal. Like a werewolf, it can die but it doesn't have a weakness of silver and is usually covered in flames like a hellhound, but it has stages like a werewolf where it can either create a pack or live alone, it's an Extinct Supernatural creature and doesn't usually passes it's bloodlines as it's child can only be either a werewolf or a hellhound and never a NetherWolf. It's stages depend on the colour of its eyes, were blue means a beta or omega and green means an Alpha. It can become a true Alpha automatically at the age to 14 if by then it hasn't killed anyone, if it does kill someone, it can't become a true Alpha, and to become a normal Alpha, it needs to kill an Alpha Werewolf and take the red of their eyes to be an Alpha which is weaker than a normal True Alpha. A normal NetherWolf beta can live for more than 10000 years, 20000 years for an Alpha and 50000 years for a True Alpha."
Me: "FUCK!!! Now that is some mystic creature! Btw after it becomes a True Alpha, can it like convert people with it's bite and can it kill others??"
Voice: "Yes and Yes, after becoming a True Alpha, it can convert people but they can only be converted to werewolfs with a weakness to silver."
Voice: "Well anyways Good for you lad! Take care!"
Me: "Hey!! HEEEEYYYYYYY!!~~~~~"
As the voice said that my consciousness faded and i fell asleep looking forward to my next life.
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