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MC character is pathetic.......................................................... A....................... I. And..... I..............................................................................................................
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I havent read yet becoz its a habit of mine to read sypnosis n comment first bfore reading ,, but just reading the sypnosis makes me wanna read it immedietly
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This is my less detailed 140 character review. Worth the read; Worth the stones- Vote Trevor McArthur for not such a scumbag Young Master yet not a Child of Gods acursed MC plot armour. Pay for armour with my stones trevor....PAY FOR IT!!!
Membuka SPOILER Writing quality: Although lacking in some areas like minor grammatical errors. Nothing to nitpick about, except the first chapter...whatever that thing was. MOAR IT'S A little slow. Amazing. Intriguing
BEST BOOK I HAVE NEVER READ! It's a masterpiece. 10/10 would read again! I love this book! :D Hey, the reader of this comment! How is the weather where you are from? I have to fill out the required amount of characters here so I may as well ask something about you. Hmm, You play any video games recently? I have been playing the new FF pocket edition on Switch it's pretty good. Anyway, I will get to reading this novel at some point. I have heard it's the best thing since sliced bread! Caio
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Although I mainly read translated Chinse novels, I also find original stories very interesting to read, especially this story - Endless Universes. I find the MC very interesting and the story line keeps me wanting to read more.
OMG. I havent even start reading yet, but the synopsis is sooo good... And the way the MC of Novel is joining review and comment is so originally awesome. I hope what you stated in synopsis stay true :D
I tried reading the story.. but it really was not that interesting. The reviews were funnier than the story. It was mostly aggravating to read The main character is worthless. I honestly don't know how to explain his character better than that word utterly worthless. Should be killed fast is the next sentence. I tried to read further because I liked the comments from the author.. and while the universe is interesting. The main character. Killed the story.. to the point I couldn't even finish chapter seven.
I was just reading the reviews and it was cracking me up... I don't mind harem stories.. but wanting to be a God throws me off. Also I like mc that are moral and ethical. My thought is I know assholes in real life why would I want to read about a successful one while I remain a nice guy and working Joe. I rather a working Joe story. Rather than Mr wrong story.
Finally at 04 September 2018. The Novel completed its first Volume. Thank you reader for the love, support, and feedback. Volume 2 is coming. It is more about his adventure while readers could see the country slightly better. He would start to visit other cities, the 'dungeon', and 'battle' difficult children of Gods. Meeting new friends and foes along the way. He would also grow, but only slightly. Gwahahaha.
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Mc is not likeable i swear worts mc i read author tried the make comedy novel but i never laugh character development is not good i waited because It's gonna be like AST but no there's nothing mc is a huge coward there not action until now
This is the most unique novel I have ever come across. The author nailed it................................................................................ Hahaha. Need to fill 140.
I thought torture is gone and start a new but nope fucKk this $hit this novel is not for me. ................ ............ ......... .........š„š„ ...... ..... .....
The few chapters are a bit unsettling its not easy to read just to enjoy it. The paced is slow a$$ F(u)ck to much info dump just to move the story forward. Foundation of the story is shakeable its easily **** up with this kind of storytelling. The character is to alive that the point me as a reader feels irritated. Im just reading your story i don't need your opinion your just a character fuCCk you. And author try to be funny way to hard to the point its not even funny, a lot of force comedy even talking feel force. But there still funny comedy in this novel so its still has hope and the this happen. My most Hateful characters 1. Darth Sidious 2.Griffith (Berserk) 3.Zetsu 4.Jake Paul 5.God (Rabbink) 6.Kirei Kotomine/ Gacha Polls 7.Fleet Admiral Akainu Good Job Author.š§š¬
the first novel where the spoiled young master is very smart and cowarldly haha,well it at least isn't your typical xianxia novel where the MC is the hero and win everything.this story present the view from other perspective where it isn't that the MC just boringly cultivate, defeat enemy, have a harem, and be an immortal(those boring xianxia plot)
140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140...........................140 ANYWAY WHAT MEANING 140?š¤ I JUST SEE SOMEONE SAY THIS (140) in review original novel
One star ratings from people who haven't read the book or find a single thing they don't like piss me off (Ignore the five-star rating I am giving this novel without reading it) (; Saw the first few reviews were good for this book, then saw the story only had a 4.0 star overall, so I went through the rest of the reviews to find the bad ones. It was just a few reviews that rated one star, one from a person who was clearly a misogynistic ******* who didn't like seeing a female with the ability to boss around a male mc, while the other one I saw left a one star review because they thought the mc was female because of the cover. Qidan really needs to do a better job with their review system, with the jank 140 character limit to rate the novel at all and not making sure the reviews pertain to the actual novel. Hopefully Qidan will eventually take down both this review and the other bogus one-star reviews, since that would mean they are actually doing something about the problem.
Why power stone lesser? Where my power stone vote this novel? I really like this novel. Absurd and anti mainstream. Is soooooo fun to reading.....lol
the story is interesting and quiet unique, rather than system the mc have op master rabbinkn as tutorial guide?. the mc is coward but have something that make me like the mc the story development is slow but it's better rathen than to rush it his bodyguard monolog is quiet amusing
I find this story humorous and a great break from working very hard and serious all the time. It makes me laugh. I laugh even more at the comments. I feel sorry for all the female readers who come for romance or a strong female lead only to find the cover misleading them as Master Rabbinkn and Trevon McArthur are definitely neither. The only thing that could top this is if Trevon wrote the same events from his point of view.
Just read this synopsis and this is one of the best and original synopsis makes me want to read and support with power stones so good job author and I support harem all the way
So this is novel isnāt really a system novel, but the MC has a system like, system thing from his master which is the author of this novel. The master is extremely op and is a rabbink. Now I know you guys donāt know what a rabbink is (shame on you) but you just have to look at the authors profile picture to get a look at what it is. Some aspects of the real world are included into the novel, such as a tablet which has the Webnovel app and also an app which I would assume is Playboy. The MC is even allowed to use the tablet to read webnovels. Honestly I donāt really see why this novel isnāt more popular. Probably because this type of writing is rare and people arenāt willing to give it a try. All the novels where the MC are weak in the beginning, but they are a genius, but they are poor, but they work hard to the top, with cultivation are honestly getting so tepetitive and boring, it gets hard to read. This provides a break from the norm. If I had to recommend an original it would be this. Best original webnovel on this whole platform imo. Definitely more I want to say, but I Iām mad tired. Mass release plz, just 40 chapters is all I want.
I really hate the rabbit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°Ā°Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story became way to gay after chapter 5 D; The MC and supporting male lead have sux with each other :0, and mpreg happens too! Oh God pls someone kill me xD also why ****q no one do gay/yaoi anymore :(, the author profile look like a rabbit/bunny or a dog :/ idk ****q that is...but I like gay stuff so ok I read :) also this novel is gay to the extreme D: pls kill me because :(, author have suz with his boyfriend/girlfriend and threesome with his potato/tomato :( Wahhhhh kill muhhh
Honestly, the reason why I click on this original novel is because of the cover :(, bc I though the title and the female cover means this story My image story: A Female MC dress as a young master and yeah etc stuff :/, but found out it also have harem :(
The MC does not resemble any Young Master of any Qidian or Wuxia Novel I've read soo Far From Being excited to disappointed People will alwayz have different tastes But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??š You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs
Because I hate Raina. End of story no more read for this. Wanna make mc coward? Ok. Wanna make mc lustful? Ok. Still can accep that. But making mc being bullied by a girl, cousin nonetheless... Meh, making me lody interest. You Author truly successful in making hateful character yet at the sametime also make me hate this story. Because of Raina.. I only give you a star. If I can, I will only give you half a star.. Zzzzzz.. Good book, acceptable mc, nice world building but ****, **** and **** girl..
Wow... a truly spoiled and shameless mc... it matches well with the author... bwahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story by the great Rabbink... .................................................................................................................... by the hottest ice
Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.
MC character is pathetic.......................................................... A....................... I. And..... I..............................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER I havent read yet becoz its a habit of mine to read sypnosis n comment first bfore reading ,, but just reading the sypnosis makes me wanna read it immedietly
Membuka SPOILER This is my less detailed 140 character review. Worth the read; Worth the stones- Vote Trevor McArthur for not such a scumbag Young Master yet not a Child of Gods acursed MC plot armour. Pay for armour with my stones trevor....PAY FOR IT!!!
Membuka SPOILER Writing quality: Although lacking in some areas like minor grammatical errors. Nothing to nitpick about, except the first chapter...whatever that thing was. MOAR IT'S A little slow. Amazing. Intriguing
BEST BOOK I HAVE NEVER READ! It's a masterpiece. 10/10 would read again! I love this book! :D Hey, the reader of this comment! How is the weather where you are from? I have to fill out the required amount of characters here so I may as well ask something about you. Hmm, You play any video games recently? I have been playing the new FF pocket edition on Switch it's pretty good. Anyway, I will get to reading this novel at some point. I have heard it's the best thing since sliced bread! Caio
Membuka SPOILER Although I mainly read translated Chinse novels, I also find original stories very interesting to read, especially this story - Endless Universes. I find the MC very interesting and the story line keeps me wanting to read more.
OMG. I havent even start reading yet, but the synopsis is sooo good... And the way the MC of Novel is joining review and comment is so originally awesome. I hope what you stated in synopsis stay true :D
I tried reading the story.. but it really was not that interesting. The reviews were funnier than the story. It was mostly aggravating to read The main character is worthless. I honestly don't know how to explain his character better than that word utterly worthless. Should be killed fast is the next sentence. I tried to read further because I liked the comments from the author.. and while the universe is interesting. The main character. Killed the story.. to the point I couldn't even finish chapter seven.
I was just reading the reviews and it was cracking me up... I don't mind harem stories.. but wanting to be a God throws me off. Also I like mc that are moral and ethical. My thought is I know assholes in real life why would I want to read about a successful one while I remain a nice guy and working Joe. I rather a working Joe story. Rather than Mr wrong story.
Finally at 04 September 2018. The Novel completed its first Volume. Thank you reader for the love, support, and feedback. Volume 2 is coming. It is more about his adventure while readers could see the country slightly better. He would start to visit other cities, the 'dungeon', and 'battle' difficult children of Gods. Meeting new friends and foes along the way. He would also grow, but only slightly. Gwahahaha.
Membuka SPOILER Mc is not likeable i swear worts mc i read author tried the make comedy novel but i never laugh character development is not good i waited because It's gonna be like AST but no there's nothing mc is a huge coward there not action until now
This is the most unique novel I have ever come across. The author nailed it................................................................................ Hahaha. Need to fill 140.
I thought torture is gone and start a new but nope fucKk this $hit this novel is not for me. ................ ............ ......... .........š„š„ ...... ..... .....
The few chapters are a bit unsettling its not easy to read just to enjoy it. The paced is slow a$$ F(u)ck to much info dump just to move the story forward. Foundation of the story is shakeable its easily **** up with this kind of storytelling. The character is to alive that the point me as a reader feels irritated. Im just reading your story i don't need your opinion your just a character fuCCk you. And author try to be funny way to hard to the point its not even funny, a lot of force comedy even talking feel force. But there still funny comedy in this novel so its still has hope and the this happen. My most Hateful characters 1. Darth Sidious 2.Griffith (Berserk) 3.Zetsu 4.Jake Paul 5.God (Rabbink) 6.Kirei Kotomine/ Gacha Polls 7.Fleet Admiral Akainu Good Job Author.š§š¬
the first novel where the spoiled young master is very smart and cowarldly haha,well it at least isn't your typical xianxia novel where the MC is the hero and win everything.this story present the view from other perspective where it isn't that the MC just boringly cultivate, defeat enemy, have a harem, and be an immortal(those boring xianxia plot)
140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140...........................140 ANYWAY WHAT MEANING 140?š¤ I JUST SEE SOMEONE SAY THIS (140) in review original novel
One star ratings from people who haven't read the book or find a single thing they don't like piss me off (Ignore the five-star rating I am giving this novel without reading it) (; Saw the first few reviews were good for this book, then saw the story only had a 4.0 star overall, so I went through the rest of the reviews to find the bad ones. It was just a few reviews that rated one star, one from a person who was clearly a misogynistic ******* who didn't like seeing a female with the ability to boss around a male mc, while the other one I saw left a one star review because they thought the mc was female because of the cover. Qidan really needs to do a better job with their review system, with the jank 140 character limit to rate the novel at all and not making sure the reviews pertain to the actual novel. Hopefully Qidan will eventually take down both this review and the other bogus one-star reviews, since that would mean they are actually doing something about the problem.
Why power stone lesser? Where my power stone vote this novel? I really like this novel. Absurd and anti mainstream. Is soooooo fun to reading.....lol
the story is interesting and quiet unique, rather than system the mc have op master rabbinkn as tutorial guide?. the mc is coward but have something that make me like the mc the story development is slow but it's better rathen than to rush it his bodyguard monolog is quiet amusing
I find this story humorous and a great break from working very hard and serious all the time. It makes me laugh. I laugh even more at the comments. I feel sorry for all the female readers who come for romance or a strong female lead only to find the cover misleading them as Master Rabbinkn and Trevon McArthur are definitely neither. The only thing that could top this is if Trevon wrote the same events from his point of view.
Just read this synopsis and this is one of the best and original synopsis makes me want to read and support with power stones so good job author and I support harem all the way
So this is novel isnāt really a system novel, but the MC has a system like, system thing from his master which is the author of this novel. The master is extremely op and is a rabbink. Now I know you guys donāt know what a rabbink is (shame on you) but you just have to look at the authors profile picture to get a look at what it is. Some aspects of the real world are included into the novel, such as a tablet which has the Webnovel app and also an app which I would assume is Playboy. The MC is even allowed to use the tablet to read webnovels. Honestly I donāt really see why this novel isnāt more popular. Probably because this type of writing is rare and people arenāt willing to give it a try. All the novels where the MC are weak in the beginning, but they are a genius, but they are poor, but they work hard to the top, with cultivation are honestly getting so tepetitive and boring, it gets hard to read. This provides a break from the norm. If I had to recommend an original it would be this. Best original webnovel on this whole platform imo. Definitely more I want to say, but I Iām mad tired. Mass release plz, just 40 chapters is all I want.
I really hate the rabbit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°Ā°Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ā°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story became way to gay after chapter 5 D; The MC and supporting male lead have sux with each other :0, and mpreg happens too! Oh God pls someone kill me xD also why ****q no one do gay/yaoi anymore :(, the author profile look like a rabbit/bunny or a dog :/ idk ****q that is...but I like gay stuff so ok I read :) also this novel is gay to the extreme D: pls kill me because :(, author have suz with his boyfriend/girlfriend and threesome with his potato/tomato :( Wahhhhh kill muhhh
Honestly, the reason why I click on this original novel is because of the cover :(, bc I though the title and the female cover means this story My image story: A Female MC dress as a young master and yeah etc stuff :/, but found out it also have harem :(
The MC does not resemble any Young Master of any Qidian or Wuxia Novel I've read soo Far From Being excited to disappointed People will alwayz have different tastes But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??š You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs
Because I hate Raina. End of story no more read for this. Wanna make mc coward? Ok. Wanna make mc lustful? Ok. Still can accep that. But making mc being bullied by a girl, cousin nonetheless... Meh, making me lody interest. You Author truly successful in making hateful character yet at the sametime also make me hate this story. Because of Raina.. I only give you a star. If I can, I will only give you half a star.. Zzzzzz.. Good book, acceptable mc, nice world building but ****, **** and **** girl..
Wow... a truly spoiled and shameless mc... it matches well with the author... bwahahahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story by the great Rabbink... .................................................................................................................... by the hottest ice
Ouch my eyes. The plot itself is barely followable and is just a mashup of tropes, while the writing itself is nigh incomprehensible due to the lack of grammar and structure. I can easily get the gist of what is going on due to the 1-D nature of the characters, but that doesn't forgive any of the egregious flaws.