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Love you again 💕 ❤️ ♥️ 💖 💜 love you again tanto you for the pleasure of this book and also giving so much fun in there format tan you a los really tan you 💕 💖 💜 ♥️ ❤️
Here are honest reviews.. This novel is about transmigration MC, who replace/ possess trash young master from powerful clan.. With the help from the assassination system, he can buy modern weapons in the cultivation world.. This is not an OP MC because of how much MC almost dead by weak villain character are uncountable.. And MC is also a teenager who falls in love with old women and "sleeps" with her, making me feel disappointed and disgusting.. If you have a fetish for old women, this novel is for you.. Even with the help from the assassination system, MC has not become that strong.. MC is just strong in technique because, if you read, his strength, constitution, agility, intelligence, and Qi are all lower than average people.. So, what I mean by MC strong in technique is that system helping MC calculating his enemy stat, show enemy weakness, calculate the position, angle, strength need to use to aim/attack his enemy, using system to get skill like concealment, stealth, and all other type of assassination skills.. Plus, the author does not care about MC Reputation in this novel.. You would see MC Reputation is no different with trash.. Plus, with clinging old women, how can MC become assassin? He always needs to send his older women and her daughter to a safe place before starting his assassination..
brainless mc, mc acting with emotions. novel is like mtl novel Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Nnnnnnnnn
ahh its a neat book hope it gets continued in either another book or gets updates soon
Ask yourself this question...you first enter a new world with a system... Wats the first thing that you do...? lo and behold..our dear MC/author decided that the first thing to do is read up about cultivation and history with the help of the system he doesn't know anything about...he didn't even check it's functions until a couple of days later after almost dying... I'm sorry author San but I can never recommend your book to anyone...you didn't put to much thought into it...juts lackadaisical... This story is not logical at all...when I saw the name ...I was really looking forward to reading it but I have not even gone far but I know I will be disappointed...😑😞😞
So far the story is rather confusing, firstly MC died and reincarnated into a typical young master with a bad reputation, MC then just casually gets into some political arguments and magically learns to fight when he was assassinated, he then is able to casually join a war and assassinate the enemy leader when he should've had strength equal to a general or the MC's father(Which I find dumb like how does he not know that there's an assassin), MC also just saved these two random people and a forced plot is developed like they spoke a total of like 4 times and then all of a sudden she's loving him? I just dropped it was a mess and majorly confusing tbh
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This is not the final review, I will change it after I know from where he learnt assassination skills right after transmigration. The jumps in character and strength is way too extreme and nonsense. Like how is he so weak yet strong, you should at least give a baseline.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.
I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential. It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!! The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution. Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on. On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning. He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.
I enjoyed the story. The earlier chapters really highlighted the protagonist's ability when it came to stealth and assassination and the usefulness of the titular assassination system. However, later on his battle style switched to more direct combat and with less focus on the system. While there was still some stealth and assassination aspects, and the system itself appears to have some story relevance, both of their appearances were so downplayed that it seems the title kind of lost its meaning. That said, it is still a good read with solid writing and work building. Unfortunately, while the author is still active, they have put this particular series on indefinite hiatus, mid-arc as well. So if you want to read this series be prepared for the (currently) abrupt ending to this series, unless the author decides to come back to it in the future.
Seams that this novel is in the wrong category since I picked out of the completed novel section. I've also seam to have most this somewhere else because at the end of this little it gets really interesting and I'm talking about this fight that is going on right now.
the novel was good but hasnt been updated in like over a year so its possibly dropped. I liked where it left off and hoped to see annie join the harem and with charlotte too but it stopped updating right before.
Damn... What just happened? After they separated things went downhill too fast. I couldn't keep up with the sudden and unreasonable developments. And the things the author does to give mystery to the story are absurd. And finally, it's like the main character of the novel changed from Dan to the wife.
I have dropped it, the principal reason is : for an assassination systèm there is a single assassination, just a single one ! In 177 chapter ! (or at least from the mc). There is kill, sure, but not assassination.
only reason it's not 5 stars is because I disagree with how he played out Dan's time with grace. I'm at the middle of 161. other than this the book is great.
“I don't remember the last time I read something as good as your poems. They make me think deep about everything. My words won't be enough.”
Hooked by novel description but After 10 chapters i feel cheated, the story and characters just don't make any sense, they are just dropped from nowhere without any kind of logic
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There is little to no explanation or exploration of World background or even MC's clan or techniques it's not that it's mystery his dad & butler knows it but never told MC. MC is thinks little to nothing logical isn't very attentive to surrounding or happenings main thing for assasin,his character didn't grow much his wife has more development than him, she went from mortal to being more powerful than MC. MC gets thrown to random places comes back boom his wife is more Powerful than before. Even his daughter has more progress than MC in month too.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
What happened to this novel? Will they keep updating or not? because if it is not finished or it will not continue finishing there is nothing to read.
Honestly needs a lot of work in my opinion, grammar isn't great and it's lacking a rather interesting plot (it's mainstream). Anyways wouldn't rec sadly to anybody I know even though I know how difficult being an author is.
the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation
Love you again 💕 ❤️ ♥️ 💖 💜 love you again tanto you for the pleasure of this book and also giving so much fun in there format tan you a los really tan you 💕 💖 💜 ♥️ ❤️
Here are honest reviews.. This novel is about transmigration MC, who replace/ possess trash young master from powerful clan.. With the help from the assassination system, he can buy modern weapons in the cultivation world.. This is not an OP MC because of how much MC almost dead by weak villain character are uncountable.. And MC is also a teenager who falls in love with old women and "sleeps" with her, making me feel disappointed and disgusting.. If you have a fetish for old women, this novel is for you.. Even with the help from the assassination system, MC has not become that strong.. MC is just strong in technique because, if you read, his strength, constitution, agility, intelligence, and Qi are all lower than average people.. So, what I mean by MC strong in technique is that system helping MC calculating his enemy stat, show enemy weakness, calculate the position, angle, strength need to use to aim/attack his enemy, using system to get skill like concealment, stealth, and all other type of assassination skills.. Plus, the author does not care about MC Reputation in this novel.. You would see MC Reputation is no different with trash.. Plus, with clinging old women, how can MC become assassin? He always needs to send his older women and her daughter to a safe place before starting his assassination..
brainless mc, mc acting with emotions. novel is like mtl novel Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Nnnnnnnnn
ahh its a neat book hope it gets continued in either another book or gets updates soon
Ask yourself this question...you first enter a new world with a system... Wats the first thing that you do...? lo and behold..our dear MC/author decided that the first thing to do is read up about cultivation and history with the help of the system he doesn't know anything about...he didn't even check it's functions until a couple of days later after almost dying... I'm sorry author San but I can never recommend your book to anyone...you didn't put to much thought into it...juts lackadaisical... This story is not logical at all...when I saw the name ...I was really looking forward to reading it but I have not even gone far but I know I will be disappointed...😑😞😞
So far the story is rather confusing, firstly MC died and reincarnated into a typical young master with a bad reputation, MC then just casually gets into some political arguments and magically learns to fight when he was assassinated, he then is able to casually join a war and assassinate the enemy leader when he should've had strength equal to a general or the MC's father(Which I find dumb like how does he not know that there's an assassin), MC also just saved these two random people and a forced plot is developed like they spoke a total of like 4 times and then all of a sudden she's loving him? I just dropped it was a mess and majorly confusing tbh
Beautifully Done Author~ 💫 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Membuka SPOILER This is not the final review, I will change it after I know from where he learnt assassination skills right after transmigration. The jumps in character and strength is way too extreme and nonsense. Like how is he so weak yet strong, you should at least give a baseline.
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.
I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential. It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!! The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution. Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on. On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning. He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.
I enjoyed the story. The earlier chapters really highlighted the protagonist's ability when it came to stealth and assassination and the usefulness of the titular assassination system. However, later on his battle style switched to more direct combat and with less focus on the system. While there was still some stealth and assassination aspects, and the system itself appears to have some story relevance, both of their appearances were so downplayed that it seems the title kind of lost its meaning. That said, it is still a good read with solid writing and work building. Unfortunately, while the author is still active, they have put this particular series on indefinite hiatus, mid-arc as well. So if you want to read this series be prepared for the (currently) abrupt ending to this series, unless the author decides to come back to it in the future.
Seams that this novel is in the wrong category since I picked out of the completed novel section. I've also seam to have most this somewhere else because at the end of this little it gets really interesting and I'm talking about this fight that is going on right now.
the novel was good but hasnt been updated in like over a year so its possibly dropped. I liked where it left off and hoped to see annie join the harem and with charlotte too but it stopped updating right before.
Damn... What just happened? After they separated things went downhill too fast. I couldn't keep up with the sudden and unreasonable developments. And the things the author does to give mystery to the story are absurd. And finally, it's like the main character of the novel changed from Dan to the wife.
I have dropped it, the principal reason is : for an assassination systèm there is a single assassination, just a single one ! In 177 chapter ! (or at least from the mc). There is kill, sure, but not assassination.
only reason it's not 5 stars is because I disagree with how he played out Dan's time with grace. I'm at the middle of 161. other than this the book is great.
“I don't remember the last time I read something as good as your poems. They make me think deep about everything. My words won't be enough.”
Hooked by novel description but After 10 chapters i feel cheated, the story and characters just don't make any sense, they are just dropped from nowhere without any kind of logic
Stretching and I don't have ah phone 🤣 the Moon 🌝 i he saiddy The Little Caesars the doo Fly 😍🤣🤣 the same time as the other ones you have I sent it Little of Moon Bay areas that
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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There is little to no explanation or exploration of World background or even MC's clan or techniques it's not that it's mystery his dad & butler knows it but never told MC. MC is thinks little to nothing logical isn't very attentive to surrounding or happenings main thing for assasin,his character didn't grow much his wife has more development than him, she went from mortal to being more powerful than MC. MC gets thrown to random places comes back boom his wife is more Powerful than before. Even his daughter has more progress than MC in month too.
Membuka SPOILER Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
What happened to this novel? Will they keep updating or not? because if it is not finished or it will not continue finishing there is nothing to read.
Honestly needs a lot of work in my opinion, grammar isn't great and it's lacking a rather interesting plot (it's mainstream). Anyways wouldn't rec sadly to anybody I know even though I know how difficult being an author is.
the story had the potential with assassination system but mc a normal person in previous life fighting to death with previous assasins all bloody and where did he get his stealth skill when he was in enemy commander room who was supposedly spirt realm and killed him but it took so much effort to kill organ tempering realm the realms in this are mostly decorations and despite having the system mc is still the trash with his pathetic cultivation