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i love the way you wrote this fic. the world building is massive and interesting that sometimes leaves me to wonder if it truly real or i wished to be real. the storyline/plot is intriguing is this fic is almost on par with path to power and shinobi of the strawhats as those are among my favorites one piece fics. So please do updates and don't kill this fic.
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this is so good!!!! the characters are amazing, the plot is not cliche, and the story starts before the canon (omg i love it). i am now looking for a novel like this, bc i think this ff is dropped by the author ¤~¤ ? idk
The last chapter update is two years ago according to the app, so Im guessing this is a dropped project. very fun read in all other aspects. But it would be nice if the author was a bit more descriptive of what the town looks like at the begining of the book.
A*** are you not updating this anymore it was really good ya know 😭😭... uh not to seem mean but if your not gonna Finnish it can some one else take over 😶
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Really great fanfic in general but personally i dont like how the mc has dreadlocks for a hairstyle although thats just my preference so dont let this discourage you. Great work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍__________________________-------------------------------------_________---------
Membuka SPOILER
I like the way the mc views the world. And i also love that he doesn't give a **** about changing the world . This is by far the best story I've read
Man this fanfic was just pure insanity, but in a good way. The emotions you feal when reading this are just off the charts i highly recommend this to all anime fans, and everyone in general
so you dropped it ffs tell us ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
This novel starts out good, and adds flavors you don’t find in other one piece fanfics, but almost at the end the author drops a stupid cliche cliff hanger and drops the novel. My advice is not to read this novel, I did and I regret it.
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11 the urban areas. I have i2j3jwj the sun. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am
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This story is terrible.There are quite a bit of spelling errors and even though the MC is called prodigy he is constantly making stupid decisions.Also none of the timeline matches up.Its basically a wuxia story in one piece. Dont take my words to heart though.You might like it so still give it a try.
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Membuka SPOILER
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A author who doesnt give a f... about his reader's questions dont read this sh** people i understand that u can feel angry about some of ur idiot reader's comments but what u are doing aint nice at all u could at least answer the people who liked to read this story but OFC u had to be a puss like most of the other authors
in my opinion one of the best fan fic storie ever written!!good mc that makes me want to continue the storie, reliable friend and a good backstorie for those who dont know the one piece world! only probleme is the amount of chapter we get, was stable before but now is a bit hard to get a chapter in a week or 2....
Story had potential but got lost along the way. Plus adding cultivation too the story with other writing devices that were not need led too more confusion. Mc character development is little to nonexistent all character had potential but not established well which led to readers questioning the reason they make certain irrational decisions. Not to the overwhelming power growth of the character which is way to fast. A story that had its potential wasted due to bad character development and introducing nonessential thing into the story
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At the beginning I really love this story but it started to resemble stories that I have previously read which the main character after going through many trials falls down into a pit and after falling down into that pit it's just really difficult to properly read the story even if you want to show that there is a mountain after Every Mountain you still need to show that some things can go to main characters way and not everything is negative. first the joyous Pirates are finished and after he finds out that his mom and dad are captured and his aunt are looking after his brother and cousin but she's in danger of being hurt next someone who's been journeying with the main character from the start is forcefully recruited to another crew whilst someone that has been told he could help just casually let him go. I have read stories like this before where everyone goes on and on about the main character's potential but never in the story will the main character reach his potential because the author seems to denote that he's never going to get there. And if you the author respond to this by saying if you continue reading the story you will see what happens I'm going to block you.
Membuka SPOILER
plz use the full potential of the air fruit like compressing air to create more power or create a freezing effect or you could create heating effect by expanding the air or taking away the oxygen of the enemy to make it hard for them to fight full power you can also take a mass(large amount) of cold and warm air to run into each other the warm air would be forces to raise and condense forming rain clouds or raining and lighting clouds (using that lighting to take out enemies) you can then form hurricane if you are out on the sea with water temperature is above 79 degree and keeping high pressure above the clouds or a weak flow of wind to make it more terrifying or if on land form a tornado.
Membuka SPOILER
Super Interesting .Waiting for further updates and also the way that you were able to blend a new past of joyous pirates to roger the real one piece , I am thoroughly intruiged. The story is definetely an emotional roller coaster and an inspiring one
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i love the way you wrote this fic. the world building is massive and interesting that sometimes leaves me to wonder if it truly real or i wished to be real. the storyline/plot is intriguing is this fic is almost on par with path to power and shinobi of the strawhats as those are among my favorites one piece fics. So please do updates and don't kill this fic.
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this is so good!!!! the characters are amazing, the plot is not cliche, and the story starts before the canon (omg i love it). i am now looking for a novel like this, bc i think this ff is dropped by the author ¤~¤ ? idk
The last chapter update is two years ago according to the app, so Im guessing this is a dropped project. very fun read in all other aspects. But it would be nice if the author was a bit more descriptive of what the town looks like at the begining of the book.
A*** are you not updating this anymore it was really good ya know 😭😭... uh not to seem mean but if your not gonna Finnish it can some one else take over 😶
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Really great fanfic in general but personally i dont like how the mc has dreadlocks for a hairstyle although thats just my preference so dont let this discourage you. Great work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍__________________________-------------------------------------_________---------
Membuka SPOILER I like the way the mc views the world. And i also love that he doesn't give a **** about changing the world . This is by far the best story I've read
Man this fanfic was just pure insanity, but in a good way. The emotions you feal when reading this are just off the charts i highly recommend this to all anime fans, and everyone in general
so you dropped it ffs tell us ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
This novel starts out good, and adds flavors you don’t find in other one piece fanfics, but almost at the end the author drops a stupid cliche cliff hanger and drops the novel. My advice is not to read this novel, I did and I regret it.
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11 the urban areas. I have i2j3jwj the sun. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am a beautiful person. I am
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This story is terrible.There are quite a bit of spelling errors and even though the MC is called prodigy he is constantly making stupid decisions.Also none of the timeline matches up.Its basically a wuxia story in one piece. Dont take my words to heart though.You might like it so still give it a try.
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Membuka SPOILER weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc weak mc trash mc nerfed mc
A author who doesnt give a f... about his reader's questions dont read this sh** people i understand that u can feel angry about some of ur idiot reader's comments but what u are doing aint nice at all u could at least answer the people who liked to read this story but OFC u had to be a puss like most of the other authors
in my opinion one of the best fan fic storie ever written!!good mc that makes me want to continue the storie, reliable friend and a good backstorie for those who dont know the one piece world! only probleme is the amount of chapter we get, was stable before but now is a bit hard to get a chapter in a week or 2....
Story had potential but got lost along the way. Plus adding cultivation too the story with other writing devices that were not need led too more confusion. Mc character development is little to nonexistent all character had potential but not established well which led to readers questioning the reason they make certain irrational decisions. Not to the overwhelming power growth of the character which is way to fast. A story that had its potential wasted due to bad character development and introducing nonessential thing into the story
I like it. I am a ****** man ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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At the beginning I really love this story but it started to resemble stories that I have previously read which the main character after going through many trials falls down into a pit and after falling down into that pit it's just really difficult to properly read the story even if you want to show that there is a mountain after Every Mountain you still need to show that some things can go to main characters way and not everything is negative. first the joyous Pirates are finished and after he finds out that his mom and dad are captured and his aunt are looking after his brother and cousin but she's in danger of being hurt next someone who's been journeying with the main character from the start is forcefully recruited to another crew whilst someone that has been told he could help just casually let him go. I have read stories like this before where everyone goes on and on about the main character's potential but never in the story will the main character reach his potential because the author seems to denote that he's never going to get there. And if you the author respond to this by saying if you continue reading the story you will see what happens I'm going to block you.
Membuka SPOILER plz use the full potential of the air fruit like compressing air to create more power or create a freezing effect or you could create heating effect by expanding the air or taking away the oxygen of the enemy to make it hard for them to fight full power you can also take a mass(large amount) of cold and warm air to run into each other the warm air would be forces to raise and condense forming rain clouds or raining and lighting clouds (using that lighting to take out enemies) you can then form hurricane if you are out on the sea with water temperature is above 79 degree and keeping high pressure above the clouds or a weak flow of wind to make it more terrifying or if on land form a tornado.
Membuka SPOILER
Super Interesting .Waiting for further updates and also the way that you were able to blend a new past of joyous pirates to roger the real one piece , I am thoroughly intruiged. The story is definetely an emotional roller coaster and an inspiring one