The Lineamentum Chronicle

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Penulis: Acedus

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Within the magical kingdom of Vasilas, every citizen wether they be a commoner or king, servant or soldier are commonly identified with the "trait" linked with their magic alignment. Those with the "honour" trait are often Knights and Nobles, those with "perseverance" are usually farmers and blacksmiths. Persephone Odius, daughter of a famous war-hero of the past enrolled in the magic academy to discover her trait and be a hero like her father... but fate had other plans.

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LV 5

Acedus

I will with the best of my ability try to release 1 chapter per day. If anybody has any feedback they want to share please leave it the comments as I'm very eager to improve my writing. Also give a reply to this review (or just send me message anywhere really) if you want me to post auxiliary character sheets for the main characters.

6yr 5

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ToOpToRead

Very engaging introduction, with a good character development. Effective language has been used, to create a captivating start. Good job, can't wait to read the rest of the novel.

6yr 3

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gee_ringdomstories

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr

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jojikojinoj

I m new to this story,so its only a superficial review,which i liked very much (for now). 1-Introduction:an quite awesome one and interesting World and its people still It kinda killed the wonders of Magic and didn't place any logical/scientific(which i liked) And a thing a don't liked much was the "i'll change society Just because It is racista(i don't know another word to say português: preconceito)" not that It was bad stil i think It lacked an Ideology

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