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Modern life cultivation is really not my type.. Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu
Wow....martial world get aliens now amazing really start story is too good up till now to the chapter of story when beast tide broke out and holy grounds started to admit to new disciples but when that star fall from sky and Mc started to fight from aliens I feels so Irritated by authors imagination. You're making story on martial arts and on cultivation stuffs okey not scf novels. Argh! I really don't wanna say but your work really whatever I say how I feels after I read your story and really starting of story too good but you made it waste of story after beast tide. I really looking forward when I read starting chapters of story but half way of story like aliens came martial world to attack make my interest to keep read to drop on that chapter!
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To be honest I had high expectations going into the novel, but honestly the author ruined it for himself. All the side notes and the constant Hahaha behind every sentence destroyed the immersion. You couldnt read a chapter without the author having to comment something in the middle of it. The story progresses wat too quickly. Theres no build up or character development to speak of. Not to mention if you see the reviews hes bumping his own novels ratings. I'm disappointed in what could have been a great story.
Hahaha this MC is a fucking idiot, it's their wedding night his family cheered him on and were like 'return to your chamber and do your duty' he's like 'huh, ok?'. He climbed in bed with her, she's super nervous and he just fucking goes to sleep hahaha. The only thing I have a problem with is there's 'Harem' tag and I don't like harems at all.
Membuka SPOILER
Chapter 1-145 good Chapter 146-264 not good for me. notnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnot
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Look story , characters ,world backstory and translations are great it's just that story is way too rushed. Its not that its bad but its just if you are not able to fully enjoy it. I mean if even the same content had been twice as long everyone would have enjoyed it more
The story is good but the update sucks MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE
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Retarded Mc...Retarded character...after only 5 chapters i don't know who i want to kill more Mc or author😤😱🤢🤬and for those who rating it 5 star,you have too test you IQ
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Nice plot and character, I really enjoy your work, I really hope that you will continue to try and publish the chapters more frequently. Once again good job and have fun.
Membuka SPOILER
Update every day off the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter
This is a very Interesting story that could be related to the real word settings and the different levels of powers in it . The more you go the more you experience
Membuka SPOILER
Okay so. -Stupid MC: Buying a treasure but decides to tell his fiancee he just met because why not? It's not like they could try to betray him for the treasure. The Writing is kinda eeh . . And again the MC is too stupid
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This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying. This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoyinThis author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying. g. This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying.
Well, how should I say this. But this stupid author gave very low reviews on other original books as that book is way better than this ****ty book. Stupid author destroying ratings. Lul pitty on you stupid monkey.
Membuka SPOILER
Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!!
I really love this story, especially the main character personality has me over the moon hahahahhaha lmao. His spudity is really world shaking hahahha. I only hope there will be more updates
Membuka SPOILER
The main idea is good but the plot development is ****. After reading the chapters you would feel like hitting the MC for his stupidity. I feel frustrated reading this light novel ......................... ........... . ..... ..............................................################################################################################
FINISH THIS!!! please I really liked this one but it's not finished and I'm just waiting for you to finish but you won't😭😭😭 please finish this
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Modern life cultivation is really not my type.. Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu Raimu asu
Wow....martial world get aliens now amazing really start story is too good up till now to the chapter of story when beast tide broke out and holy grounds started to admit to new disciples but when that star fall from sky and Mc started to fight from aliens I feels so Irritated by authors imagination. You're making story on martial arts and on cultivation stuffs okey not scf novels. Argh! I really don't wanna say but your work really whatever I say how I feels after I read your story and really starting of story too good but you made it waste of story after beast tide. I really looking forward when I read starting chapters of story but half way of story like aliens came martial world to attack make my interest to keep read to drop on that chapter!
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To be honest I had high expectations going into the novel, but honestly the author ruined it for himself. All the side notes and the constant Hahaha behind every sentence destroyed the immersion. You couldnt read a chapter without the author having to comment something in the middle of it. The story progresses wat too quickly. Theres no build up or character development to speak of. Not to mention if you see the reviews hes bumping his own novels ratings. I'm disappointed in what could have been a great story.
Hahaha this MC is a fucking idiot, it's their wedding night his family cheered him on and were like 'return to your chamber and do your duty' he's like 'huh, ok?'. He climbed in bed with her, she's super nervous and he just fucking goes to sleep hahaha. The only thing I have a problem with is there's 'Harem' tag and I don't like harems at all.
Membuka SPOILER Chapter 1-145 good Chapter 146-264 not good for me. notnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnotnot
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Look story , characters ,world backstory and translations are great it's just that story is way too rushed. Its not that its bad but its just if you are not able to fully enjoy it. I mean if even the same content had been twice as long everyone would have enjoyed it more
The story is good but the update sucks MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE MORE UPDATE PLEASE
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Retarded Mc...Retarded character...after only 5 chapters i don't know who i want to kill more Mc or author😤😱🤢🤬and for those who rating it 5 star,you have too test you IQ
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very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!very good i like that!!!
Nice plot and character, I really enjoy your work, I really hope that you will continue to try and publish the chapters more frequently. Once again good job and have fun.
Membuka SPOILER Update every day off the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter of the chapter
This is a very Interesting story that could be related to the real word settings and the different levels of powers in it . The more you go the more you experience
Membuka SPOILER Okay so. -Stupid MC: Buying a treasure but decides to tell his fiancee he just met because why not? It's not like they could try to betray him for the treasure. The Writing is kinda eeh . . And again the MC is too stupid
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This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying. This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoyinThis author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying. g. This author is amazing on making Readers annoyed. HAHAHAHA.. Mc is just so idiotic+5000 😂😂😂😂😂😂 and so annoying.
Well, how should I say this. But this stupid author gave very low reviews on other original books as that book is way better than this ****ty book. Stupid author destroying ratings. Lul pitty on you stupid monkey.
Membuka SPOILER Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!! Best novel ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You should read this!!!!!!!! You won’t regret it!!!!!!!!!!
I really love this story, especially the main character personality has me over the moon hahahahhaha lmao. His spudity is really world shaking hahahha. I only hope there will be more updates
Membuka SPOILER The main idea is good but the plot development is ****. After reading the chapters you would feel like hitting the MC for his stupidity. I feel frustrated reading this light novel ......................... ........... . ..... ..............................................################################################################################
FINISH THIS!!! please I really liked this one but it's not finished and I'm just waiting for you to finish but you won't😭😭😭 please finish this