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(Hiatus) VRMMORPG: Second Chance of the Dark King
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It was the year 2506 and the disparity between the poor and the rich were getting wider. Hei Wangtian was a poor high schooler in poverty until the new Virtual Reality game ‘Utopia’ came out. He created the account Dark King and rose to fame. He, unfortunately, had gotten arrogant and left all his friends to be his lone thief. As the game progressed he realized he needed a guild but it was to late. Meanwhile, on the other side of the game his ‘best friend’ whom he had ignored, had revealed his real life information to an arrogant young master who sent people to kill him. As his life was ended Hei Wangtian wondered where he had gone wrong and wished for a second chance. It seemed that god had granted his wish.
******Utopia meens paradise where nothing is wrong. Unlike heaven, utopia is supposedly on Earth. In this game the goddess has promised an Utopia which is the main story line. That what the 4 Empires in the game are competing for.
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Just because it's short is why it's 2.6 stars other than that das goo ................................................................................me filling the comment requirement
I can only review it off of what is in front of me and as of this review there are only two chapters. The current two chapters are extremely short and the content within seems rushed and of barely acceptable level. I will say as a story start it is pretty much the same as any other of it's genre and in some cases not as widely explained and had left much to be desired. If the story does continue I would continue reading to see if it got better over time however currently no point in reading these two chapters. Good start if you are new to writing however I believe each chapter should be at least double it's size and the quality (grammar and other points) should be considered since the current chapters have many mistakes.