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Upside Down Apocalypse
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In a peaceful world where stone tools are common and money an unknown concept Emmeline begins her virgin journey to find a husband.
What awaits her are the emergence of the system, potentially insane fairies and the founding of a city the likes of which her world never even dreamed of.
Watch as young Emmeline rises in knowledge, power and fame as a tree singer to prevent tragedies the system and the fairies bring to her primitive world.
The only question is...with her goals upside down, is it still her virgin journey?
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- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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My english is quite terrible but I read a lot and sometimes I dont even care about the grammar as long as I got the gist of the story and I enjoyed it. Probably half of the day goes to reading. Well, keep posting chappy as I love all the novels with apocalypse genre. Thanks in advance ya :))
Don't let the 1 star bother you. Keep writing. Read more and write more. Good luck on your writing journey. The more you write, the better you will be at it.
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The story starts off on the worst foot possible, a vague pronoun reference. I'm not petty grammar wise, but I think a bit of editing would increase the chance of me reading further. So far not huge on the characters, feels like this is already heading in the Mary/Marty Sue direction.. Not for me, but I encourage others to give it a shot (can't hurt). 🙄