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liking PRIDE (a REAL man) instead of GLUTTONY (a gender-less boy/girl-more on girl side body with a mans soul) don't get me wrong i dig rimaru and i also think Di-Vinchi is SEXY in FATE{probably mis spelling}i'm for gender equity and a fellow man of culture so sue me.
5 stars for no harem tag....This fic also actually quite really good really good........... ..... ..... ........ . .... .. .... ... I wasted your time successfully
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Membuka SPOILER It would be a 4 Star if you not made the spear a female it ruined the flow reading flow and here I thought that this Mc was cool with a crazy Bro, but no...๐
Amazing Author! he is the only person who's mc is arrogant and yet I don't hate him.... END OF THE REVIEW! .
so yea the story is great though the mc has level 1,000,000,000 protagonist luck and didn't get 1 shot by gilgamesh the stories great but to me the mc personality is a bit of a turn off and it is a little wish fullmenty i would recommend you read if you have free time and don't take it too seriously.
Haven't yet read much but from what I've seen you've definitely improved from your first fic. I like the mc even if usually i disdain overly prideful types, but this one makes it funny, maybe because of the talking spear in his head but it's fun to look at their banter. Anyway, good job, great improvement, hope to see more
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Writing Quality (5 Stars): The story is easy to read, without many grammar errors. I haven't seen any spelling errors, so we are good here. Stability Updates (4 Stars): 5 chapters released in 6 days, not a bad number. Story Development (4 Stars): To make it simple, the MC is a normal human who refused reincarnation and was sealed for billions of years as punishment. After billions of years he found an overpowered cursed lance who gave him the ability to change his fate. Character Design (4 Stars): The MC is an extremely prideful individual, seeing everything as below him. For now the only emotions who seem to affect him are wrath, pride and curiosity. He totally lack empathy and wouldn't care even his actions destroyed an entire planet. In the end, even thought he is not too annoying, his character is not the best. World Background (5 Stars): A multiverse story No-Harem, something extremely rare. Anyway, for now the mc is in Fate/Grand Order. Total Score: 4.4 Stars
Seems great so far, Love the Mc and it's really unique and different from other fics. .............,.......................................................................................................
Really loving your stories hope you continue to post and dont ever drip them๐คฉ๐คฉ
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