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Bab 1: twin brothers : introduction

In a remote place in the douluo continent two kids were playing near a tiny village where no one would expect a powerful being hiding here waiting for his kids to grow and be able to take care of themselves.

-It's almost time for them to awaken their spirits and for me to take my revenge , i wonder if one of my kids will awoke the clear sky hammer or the blue silver grass ...

Just as that powerful being was murmuring that, two kids suddenly step inside his house with big smiles on their face and an elder at their side.

-Tang Wu! Good news! Tang san and Tang han are going to be spirit masters! When will you send them to school?

-What school? We're too poor!

-I can tell from all the rubbish laying around! Your kids are going on the village's scholarship, you don't need to pay!

-Oh?As long they don't stop cooking then it's fine.

The elder hearing how that drunkard was talking got angry and yell a him like he was the worst man ever before getting out of the house leaving the two kids with that "drunkard"

-When the spirit is awaken , there will be a spirit mark on the master's body what's yours ?

-River grass, junk spirit, but i don't know why there is another mark on my other hand...

-What did you say ? Another mark ? show me !

Tang san showed his two hands to his father and suddenly a bottle crashed on the floor leaving a father amazed and staring at his son like he was a diamond in rough shell.

-...You! Double spirits... essence harmonization...

Suddenly the drunkard hugged his son crying which let his sons astonished because they never saw their father crying or even showing a single emotional emotion toward him or his brother.

-listen son , never , ever show your hammer spirit to anyone without having complete trust toward that person, understood ?

-Understood. *why do i have to hide it ?*

-And you Tang han ,what spirit do you have ?

-I don't really know what spirit it is the master that did my awakening never saw that spirit, but something tell me that it is called susanoo , i think.

Without a second Tang han showed a little skeleton above his hand which seemed to be incomplete but very powerful , it gave Tang Hao a feeling of inferiority while himself had one of the most powerful spirit.

-I never saw that spirit before... But it seems incomplete but powerful , maybe your spirit will evolve after absorbing a few rings, I don't know, well , my sons i will show you my smithing technique you will have to look carefully , look at my every movements.

Tang Hao showed his sons his smithing technique which let the two kids completely dumbfound because they never saw their father forging like that before , now it was almost like Hephaestus , the smithing god descend on hearth and took possession of Tang hao's body to show them that amazing technique.

After showing them his real technique Tang hao left the house and headed to the elder's house to

hand him the money required for the entrance fee of the Nortan Academy.

Nortan Academy ... This is the place Tang san and his twin brother will go and meet their master which will led them to the top of this world and be known by all in the douluo continent for generations and generations...


PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA
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Hey there , this is the first time i'm writing something and showing it in public so go easy on me , english is not my primary language and i'm not used to write...

i hope you enjoy it , even if it's a little !

this chapter is an introduction , the next chapters will be more interesting ! ;)

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