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[On Hold] Star Wars: One with the Force
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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away....
One man had a story some would call tragic, while others envied him for being called a Hero.
He was someone who always had a knack for strategy and tactics, being first a Jedi, then being corrupted into a Sith Master, due to a couple of complications and 300 years of torture, it all came to an end with both opposite aspects coming together with him being One with the Force, but he couldn't just let go, so he took a decision in his last moments that would forever change his life and history.
Please share with me a lot of constructive criticism, I would be very happy to improve my writing style and story with your feedback.
I have a very demanding job on weekdays, this novel is currently on hold since I'm studying the lore and creating the big picture, as soon as I have a better understanding, I'll publish more chapters.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters of the Star Wars universe.
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Amazing story . Especially the mystery the explanation gives. The writing, development and world design is good. Just In the start there’s could be a glossary explaining the relations of the characters( not there powers, background or so) just blabla is blbla’s mom/father/sister or so just for the first 5 chapters cause it’s hard to understand who is who’s parents
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