ah the edgy emo guy!!!!
It's hard to befriend and spend time with about 5–6-year-old children when you lived for almost 30 in the previous life. Those children are just too immature for Yuta to give them any attention.
Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
get well soon man
how about this?
It had two sets of wings much like a thunder bird that were folded against it's body at the moment and four clawed bird feet that gave the form a griffin like feel. That was where the avian features ended however as it had a long serpentine tail at the end of it's body covered in feathers but ending in a familiar circular metallic ring. It also had a short neck that ended in a basilisk like head that included the sharp horns except that it's mouth had a beak at the end. It was honestly one of the most eerily beautiful creatures Nick had ever seen.-
Book&Literature · loskro
man i hope you stop this it's really annoying
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Anime & Comics · LightOfCertainity
As long as you don't drop it, it's fine and for the future you might wanna hold back any more new templates from gacha than he already has a basic build that a character can be based of any more and previous character templates will be forgotten and you might end paying all the attention to making sure all the powers acquired are being used and story might suffer but if you build up on what you have this character is gonna be awesome. Just a suggestion
Most of the time self inserts are atleast somewhat related to writers themselves as it is wish fulfillment, if that's the case with you then dude you must really hate yourself. i am obviously dropping this and good luck to you.
you need to keep in mind that the characters you are writing about are adults with responsibilities, people like them don't get excited about things or at least they don't show them on their faces, specifically a lord paramount of north won't say "wow". the moment i read that i closed the tab immediately. just try to understand the frame of mind of the character.
It's gurararara
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Anime & Comics · Noland29
This is an interesting premise can't wait for next chapters
Knew that dialogue was coming just knew it!!!!
"Cyning Ragnar, þæt is his nama. (King Ragnar, that is his name.)"
A Song Of Ice And Fire: The King Of Winter
Book&Literature · EddyVirgil