Shikki_kun

I'd say demon and give him a transformation, similar to awakening for shadow shadow fruit from one piece

what races are you gonna introduce? don't give him some bs like saiyan or kryptonian that would be no fun, if you're gonna do races I think you should do (sub) human races that can make other types of energy, such as Chakra, qi, magic power, mana, or maybe even give him a demon transformation from 7ds like meliodas, but nerf it cause obviously the world level can't handle the full power of that stuff

I mean it depends on what you consider small or big, if small is like 5 and below then small harem, there's no fun in a huge harem for no reason, also I do have something to complain about now (sorry) don't put updates between every chapter 😭, if you're gonna put updates somewhere you should put it at the bottom of an already made chapter cause whenever I see a an update I think it's a new chapter but it's just your talking and honestly it kinda works out for early word count since you don't have a lot rn (no hate or criticism just an opinion)

the only thing I'd complain about is grammar, some words aren't in the correct plural and some periods with coma would be nice too

vi Caitlin and jinx, in all honesty I feel like Felicia should die for powder and vi' transformation into like the cold version of vi and the yandere version of jinx, cause unless you make up a completely random way for them to transform its not gonna feel as natural now

yes make genderbent characters, since it's an alternate universe it'll also make sense, plus who wouldn't want a tan tomboy that kicks people's ass

it's all good, I was just voicing my opinion and you're doing great so far, keep up the good work

it's good so far, but I think you shouldn't explain some things so much like, it took maybe 5-6 chapters I think? for the time skip to actually happen since Felicia got injected with the shimmer, if you don't focus so much on explaining things there would be a lot more development and content. just my opinion

cortana from halo and eventually give her a synthetic body, any girl from wuthering waves, honkai star rail, genshin impact Honkai impact 3rd etc, girls front KOF or street fighter would be good, final fantasy would also be amazing. there's a shit ton of video game girls you can go for but yk just my opinion

cyberpunk + slayer or samurai + demon lord