Daoiste1

nope

holy moly i got one who knosws

This is what I was talking about when you say things like this, it creates discomfort and irritation. I know it’s not perfect from the start because I’ve been constantly comparing myself to others. You know, when you use practical knowledge, it becomes hard, and you keep forgetting everything.

Considering you already have 5000 comments, I can understand why it’s like this, but still, it’s important to balance praise with criticism. I understand that after a long time, it can become more difficult, especially if you’ve been doing it constantly, and at some point, you just get tired.

No problem, you’re stating facts, and I’m not saying you're wrong. Let me put it more clearly to make my point. Your critique really helps, but honestly, I don’t like that you focus only on the mistakes. In the latest chapters, I’ve been trying to improve the dialogues, and maybe it’s not perfect, but there are also positive aspects. When you critique, it’s important to notice not just the negatives but also the good parts. For example, today someone left a review on my fanfic: they praised it and pointed out mistakes. That really motivates me and helps me understand what to do next. But with you, it seems like you focus more on the mistakes than on the positive. That’s not very pleasant. Critique as much as you want, but include praise as well. Then your advice will be taken more seriously. Just from everything I’ve seen, you haven’t mentioned anything positive. It gives the impression that you’re only pointing out mistakes and nothing else.