I can say its gonna be a good story, just need to make it longer so the readers can understand what's happening at the chapter, and explain the world background, for the characters, you should give them some character development in the upcoming chapters great story and i love actions so i stay tuned^^
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I see you did a great chapter, i'm looking forward for more!
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Thanks for the review, i can assure you that i will make more interesting chapters for all of you, so stay tuned and support me^^
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While pedaling away from the campus, he saw from afar, a little girl walking and crying at the street, looks alone or seperated from her parents. Suddenly, another terrifying figure appears behind the little girl, and it was rushing towards her. Vins eyes widened in fear and nervous, he fastened his pedals to reach the little girl on time, suddenly his wheel hit a hams -something in the roads so that vehicles can slow down, usually using in Philippines. He flew towards the little girl, but using his quick reflexes, he grabbed the bicycle, and throw it at the terrifying figure, landing infront of the child, and hugging it. "You'll be okay...i promise..", he said.
Zompocalypse
Horror · Dark_Weaver_18
Thank you for a great review, you can assure that i can give you more interesting chapters stay tune!
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A 17 yrs old senior high school student named, Vins, woke up in the school clinic with no nurse at all, as he goes outside, its no longer like before, the environment smelled like dead corpse, everything has blood, and zombies are everywhere. His goal is to protect the girl he likes, and find a safe place.32 Chs 122 Collections
Looks interesting tho
This Situation is Unfortunate
Fantasy · Author_LostSea