Thanks? 😅
"That is not possible," she said, her tone laced with disdain. "Your only chance to return was to succeed in the Ascender Games. Since you've proven yourself unworthy, there is no place for you here—or anywhere."
Fantasy · Ash_Valtorix_X
NO 😅 But will edit soon, I realized typing and editing quickly, has it's down sides.
The women brought food and fruits from their house, probably what they were to have for dinner. The men started a bonfire that, children roasted under; marshmellows with crackers and then meat.
Fantasy · Ash_Valtorix_X
I will assume this is a correction. So thanks 😊. I'll edit the chapters, so please bear with me.
He stared intently at the screen, watching the bugged brigade Ace's avatar slowly disintegrate, his HP dropping to a dangerously low level ND he was on his last life.
Fantasy · Ash_Valtorix_X
Would be lovely if you gift mine. But alas i am still learning and improving. I would be honored to have you and many others as my reader 😊
Eh okay 😅
Oh and also, thank you for looking out for him, he would really appreciate it. 😊
I didn't steal his book, and i am not him. Yes it is his idea and cover, but definitely not his book. He gave it to me, you could ask him yourself. and i would really appreciate, if you please drop the review or put a better one if you like the book. Thanks 🙂
Err?
Read the first chapter and i got hooked untill the third. However, had to stop there to write. Anyways, The world background, character development, as well as the story development is all good. Just the grammatical and typographical errors. Anyways, nice story keep it up author. I would really love it, if Tahir does gruesome revenge for his parents, they deserve it.
Typo 🫠 so sorry
"You never seem to amaze me, Uravis. Just a week and you're acting like a grown man now," she feigned a pained expression, earning a groan from him.
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Fantasy · Ash_Valtorix_X