UnderwaterDreamer

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UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
6 days ago
Commented

A laugh after a another, hahaha

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
6 days ago
Commented

🤣

"Hopefully we decide before I starve to death." (Jerry)

Safety second

Safety second

Anime & Comics · Master_Cheater

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
8 days ago
Commented

I'm not English, but in most if not all the novels I've read, authors didn't use the negative of the positive (wasn't like), but used something like "was different than". I'm not sure.

As the situation wasn't like a few years back and they actually had permission to make a ship and set sail, they decided to come up with an actual blueprint for it first.

Safety second

Safety second

Anime & Comics · Master_Cheater

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
8 days ago
Commented

Hahaha, what an interesting story!

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
8 days ago
Commented

avenging

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Safety second

Safety second

Anime & Comics · Master_Cheater

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
11 days ago
Commented

I'm sorry but this is not for me. It's only my taste, the writing is good for what matters. This chapter's less vague than the start, but I can't comprehend the MC character, like why he do something, what he want to do. Yes, he want to protect himself and his bloodline, but why is it so? Can't he survive for himself and be neutral or take the good guy's part?

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
11 days ago
Commented

A bit rushed kind of chapter. The writing style is a medley of epic and mysterious, but it give a bad taste of nothing said. But I'm curious if it's your writing style (if so, it's interesting but, like I said, it is a bit too much vague. Well, for me, at least) or if after a bit, you'll slow down.

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
1 months ago
Commented

It repeats

A cruel, humorless smile crossed her face as he backed into the center of the aisle, preparing himself to run. At the table, Fred and George exchanged worried glances with Susan, but remained silent. They obviously weren't fool enough to try to defuse the situation.

Harry Potter and the Champions

Harry Potter and the Champions

Book&Literature · Ace_18_

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
1 months ago
Replied to Rovontheus

What the... hahahaha

"Next up, we have Ifaku, the master of the Domineer Viagra Path Style!"

OPM: It's Hero time

OPM: It's Hero time

Anime & Comics · Rovontheus

UnderwaterDreamer
UnderwaterDreamer
1 months ago
Commented

. . . 🧐

If you could point them out, that would make my life easier. :)

OPM: It's Hero time

OPM: It's Hero time

Anime & Comics · Rovontheus