Snakeeye

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Snakeeye
4 months ago
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I never expected to see Obita being hunted and stakes were literally high through out the whole chapters. Thanks for the chapter

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Snakeeye
4 months ago
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I never thought fanfic can be that good all the plots were interesting. Thank you for your work.

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Snakeeye
6 months ago
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Is it possible if you could update this chapter?, I see you went for the tragedy but if you want to show that tragedy the death of the Aunt was great plote. But going straight to kill Might Guy and Lee going rogue just doesn't make any sense. The thing is you can keep Rock Lee in the hospital where he finds that his aunt is dead and you can also show how due to Sasuke he wasn't able to save his aunt. With that Lee would understand much more that it isn't just a manga world afterall. I think it would feel more natural. But at the end of the day I am not a author but these were my few cents in this topic. Your writing was great in the previous chapter that I just read all the chapters in 3 hours and all these kept on the edge.