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Mr. Starry Sky, thank you for your encouragement, but I can't help but notice that you always rate many fan-fics with one star and always berate and insult the other authors. My suggestion for you is to improve your mental health, this life isn't for you [img=recommend]

From my perspective though, there are similarities between the two. Mostly their destructive prowess is identical, though Crush has some differences with One for All and I tried my best to add that aspect to this story. Such as the MC can destroy anything he comes in contact with, that's why in many fights he only uses his fingertips to fight, it does come off as a rip-off since Midoriya had the same problems with trying to control his quirk. But if I add, even Gildarts himself has trouble controlling his signature magic due to its destructive abilities, in the latest chapter I did add some properties, such as when Gildart's magic hits a human it could split them apart into mini versions of themselves (if he unintentionally or doesn't hold any malice against the person) I toned the MC's quirk cause I read that in many wiki's that if Gildart's is unfocused he could destroy or smash anything he come's into contact with. Many heroes in MHA have some setbacks, though I would love Kazuki to be an overpowered character, his quirk can tilt the balance of the MHA world, I did do my research and watched the Fairy Tail anime, though I don't remember the whole plot since it's been years since I rewatched the anime. Before writing this fic I did my research and entered many wiki sites trying to fully understand Gildart's magic, but it seems like I was lacking in adding such aspects in the story since it comes off as a Walmart version of One for All. I deeply apologize as the author for making it look and seem that way, I'll refine such aspects and emphasize the difference between One for All and Crush.

Hello! I'm still new to writing, there are still loopholes in the story. There would be some grammatical errors since English isn't my primary language. The story development needs some refining, I read one of the comments and I completely agree. My fic doesn't have that depth ya know? I'm more focused on the world background rather than the main character and the characters feel off. I'll refine that aspect, as well as the fighting scenes and other essentialities to improve my story. I have a lot of free time since it's summer vacation, that's why I'm updating like crazy. I still have tons to improve, that's why I'm rating myself 4.4 (Come on, even if I'm lacking I wouldn't rate myself a 1, spare me) (The gif is my face when I'm writing new chapters)