Rimotoamano

I enjoy this fanfic quite a lot. The mc is relatable and mostly consistent. I also really enjoy the story and the abilities you've chosen for the character. Just some advice to improve the work, maybe up the word count by around 25% for each chapter, also include the POV's of each character more when the mc does something significant with another one, for example Gojo's POV when finding out about mc or Mechamaru upon seeing how strong he is. Don't do harem like other commentors ask. Finally, make sure you write the story in a way you enjoy to avoid burn out, and have fun!

Some of the middest of mid I’ve ever seen. Mc is a downright horrendous and completely un likable heap of trash. The narrations irritate any responsible human being without limit. The plot is like the only somewhat reeding quality but it can’t carry. The concept is unoriginal with lazy trash having an idle system it’s just lowest of lower tier. Everything is mid, if your a lazy trash you’d enjoy it or if for some reason you like those types of mc you’d also enjoy it. If not this ain’t the novel for you.

I actually really enjoy this, something I'll add to my library rather than a one time read. The immersion is great, flow is great, dialogue is good, fight scenes good. Everythings good.

It’s quite good, not much I can critique. Appreciate the story and beginning it’s quite unique. Also the writing quality doesn’t give me epilepsy reading it. It’s flows well and it’s immersive. Nice man.

From the start I could see high quality writing. It’s also quite enjoyable and immersive providing a nice contrast between the sad start. I also felt that connection with the mc so I can tell it’s good. I also very much enjoy well executed sports/showbiz/music works so keep it up.

This is actually fire. Loving the concept from the start, and it even flows and reads like some actual published hard covers. Amazing job man.

Thank you bro, that's where half of the effort per chap comes from. Think realistically about the musical side of things. I really try to put thought into it.

I very much appreciate the simplicity of the writing. Especially dialogue between characters. It’s not too fleshed out or too bare. And it’s pretty nice to the eyes. Especially the mc who is actually cool, and not generic for once.

Shameless review from author here! While I don't know if everyone will enjoy this novel, what I can say is I'll do my best to limit everyone's dislike of it. The style of this novel is and will always be more casual and laid-back. I'm also trying my best to make mc more relatable and realistic, and giving actual depth to the writing and plot unlike a lot of recent system novels. I hope you enjoy, and give me good reviews, that's all! Author, out.