Love it. One suggestion though, Please add quotations for the dialog. It's a little confusing when you use the arrows.
I love Percy Jackson and danmachi so this story is a dream come true! Please do Percy Jackson justice as a mc, he one of the best.
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Very happy to see campione get a story. Please continue with the great work, author! Would you mind answering if are there any goddess love interests?
Haven't seen a Strike the blood story on here in a while. You did a very good job with this. Looking forward to continuing this.............
was this taken down for copyright? its no longer showing up for me. I was able to get on this chapter after refreshing a bunch of times.
So far I really enjoy the story. Do you have any love interests in mind, author? I always thought that there were some good love interests in tokyo revengers and I'm curious who you plan to make Kayne's love interests. Of course if you would not like to spoil it, you don't have to. I'm looking forward to continuing this story no matter what.
Interesting so far. looking forward to seeing where it goes. If you could, No Issei please. He's really annoying and would be a issue if you plan to incorporate Rias in the story.
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The goat is back with another great story. you did a great job again author. Please make sure you dont overwork yourself or something author. Everything you make is great but having like 5 stories at the same time might be hard to manage.
One of the only stb FF on here and I'm very happy it's this good. Keep up the good work author! Also so far there's no problems with your English, so thank you for putting care into that!
You've set this story up really well. I really like the long detailed chapters, very good for a first fic. This story has lots of potential.
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