sure, I Don't mind.
this is my own thoughts of my own book! 1. i think the pacing can be better(arc 2 will fix that). 2. the story updates will most likely be juggled with my other books. 3. the writing quality, it's great. but can be better!
tell me what you thought of this chapter! don't hold back, but I'm sure you enjoyed it:)
I hope you enjoy the book/webnovel this book is inspired by God Game by Brandon Chen and Alice In Wonderland on Netflix this is also a novel or manga anyway I hope you enjoy the webnovel and please do comment on it and tell me feedback and more! also this story is a 10/10 for me because well it's my book i spend time making it
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