interesting but i mean like a MC that already has lived throughout ancient human civilizations
wait i like the start of this story. Do you think u can make or find a story where the MC is an immortal like Vandal Savage in DC.
the world is interesting
nice chapters hope u keep up the good work, im hoping u can put a more cosmic perspective since the mc has died and came back to life. Maybe the MC should be more of a researcher
hey this is cool but i think i would like to see some timeskips
heat vision as an additional tool helped beerus
He unleashed his heat vision with unparalleled precision. The beams sliced through the air like lasers, cutting through Battle Beast's defenses with surgical precision. The lion-like creature let out a roar of agony as the searing energy seared through his fur and flesh, bringing him to his knees.
Anime & Comics · aka_jarrett
thats a good point thanks for pointing it out to me
The older boy reached out his hand for a handshake, "Greetings, cousin. My name is Beerus." As they shook hands, Beerus noticed that Mark's flesh felt soft as clay. 'He hasn't awakened his powers?' However, he kept that thought to himself as Mark focused on the pizza in his hand. "Dad, you got pizza! Is it from that place in New York?" Mark exclaimed eagerly.
Anime & Comics · aka_jarrett
interesting maybe in the future ill do that with him
oh..
"Is this all your world has to offer?" Beerus muses aloud, his voice carrying over the desolate landscape. "Pathetic."
Anime & Comics · aka_jarrett
i miss the old story but i like the start of this
[MARVEL/DC] LANDFALL
Anime & Comics · AceOfCrowns