WeavedSlave

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We are all slaves of nature

2024-02-17 Joint Global
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WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

The best feeling ever

On the day of the winter solstice, Sunny woke up feeling tired and drowsy. No matter how much he tried to shake off this listlessness, it wouldn't go away. In the end, he just stayed in the bed for a while, wrapping himself in a blanket.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Replied to Alex_xin

Well, you are being logical here.

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Replied to Nikhil_Kumar_0802

Not here, brother.

Sunny was pretty sure that his shadow was capable of much more than just being a silent follower. After all, the Spell had described it as being an invaluable helper. It was now up to him to find out how exactly Shadow Control could be of help.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

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As the saying went, "An outstanding tree will definitely be blown down by the wind. If a tree is too tall, the winds will never allow it to survive."

Fey Evolution Merchant

Fey Evolution Merchant

Eastern · Amber Button

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

means darkness

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

Love long titles

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Fantasy Breed That Is Severely Injured

Fey Evolution Merchant

Fey Evolution Merchant

Eastern · Amber Button

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

Ummm

After forming a contract with a human, no matter what kind of fey, even a Normal one, would possess an ability. The type of ability was most probably a species' innate ability.

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Fey Evolution Merchant

Eastern · Amber Button

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

Kinda cliched

When the copper bracelet had vanished, it hadn't just robbed his senses toward the world's spirit qi, but it had also robbed his spiritual energy.

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Eastern · Amber Button

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Commented

Straightforward

[Near the boundary of the outer and outmost layer of the forest Creator]

I created my own system

I created my own system

Fantasy · LAZYHEAD

WeavedSlave
WeavedSlave
10 months ago
Posted

In summary, this is a story of a thirteen year old boy who created something (which I think is a system) in a secret library, and with the goal of becoming stronger using the system he created. Strengths of the story are simple-straightforward language, simplicity of author's tone and slightly meaningful story development. Weaknesses includes the misuse of punctuation marks, extremely slow pacing, and the lack of proper characterization. While reading it, I don't feel thrilled nor can I find strong suspense but nonetheless, it's readable. In my opinion, there are a lot of things to correct. Really. I recommend it to all youngsters around the world.