Kogure here great story so far only problem is the grammar, not that I mind because I'm able to understand the idea u are trying to get across. Would be great if you fixed it up a bit for a higher chance to get contracted I think
this is an interesting story, why'd you stop author I was really intrigued
would if i could but I'm really busy , the only time I get to write is on a moving bus for twenty minutes to and from my destination. I'll try and fix that on Saturdays and sometimes Sundays so bare with me.
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hey author, your story is great so far. I'm a big fan of basketball so I love the context, I wrote some of my own give a read when you have time
finished chapter 3, good storyline so far
sure I'm down
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are you enjoying the story so far? if there is an grammatical error lmk
I posted two chapters today instead of one, enjoy
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will be the last chapter I post until my views increase to at least 10k or i at least get some feedback. iIneed to know if my story is reaching actual people and not robots . in the meantime I'll be focusing on my other stories .
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Author Kogure here, hope that you're enjoying the story so far, though it's not the best in terms of plot and character development feel free to drop comments and reviews so I may know how to improve on future chapters and books.