Your writing skills is wonderful but your could a little touch ups on the story development. The characters are great but I think with a little development to your story lines, you can rival most of the top 50 Novels.
I love the system.
Great job creating such great abilities. Make sure you reference the details of each ability when use in a fight.
Also try and introduce new subordinates fast so we can get stories on all of them.
I love Sabrat.
Keep at it Author. Don't drop it midway.
Webnovel
Your writing skills is wonderful but your could a little touch ups on the story development. The characters are great but I think with a little development to your story lines, you can rival most of the top 50 Novels. I love the system. Great job creating such great abilities. Make sure you reference the details of each ability when use in a fight. Also try and introduce new subordinates fast so we can get stories on all of them. I love Sabrat. Keep at it Author. Don't drop it midway.
Rebirth Of The Supreme One
Fantasy · Pen_Drop