it's good I didn't notice s single Grammer mistake,the characters are...alright we don't have many chapters so I can't judge them correctly 😅,the plot is going in a good direction I really like it overall writing quality 5/5 story 5/5 characters design 2.5/5( I'm not saying it's bad I just put it in the middle till we have more chapters) update stability...now that's a problem it's kind of random right now maybe the author is going to school or has a job so I understand world background 2.5/5 in the latest chapter we caught a glimpse of the world background but it isn't much
I just realiz that I'm the only comment
he's going to make assassin's creed I bet it on my middle left tooth
(Maybe I should ask Alex to make something for me? I bet he can do something that will surprise me.)
Creating games in the future
Others · just_a_potato_soul
I don't normally pay taxes but I'll make an exception this time
Before you read, the cookie tax (stones) has returned! You need to pay the tax before you can read :3
My diary system in Marvel
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
At this moment, the audience in the stands were all aroused by the huge enthusiasm of the attack just now. The cheers were climaxing.
MCU: Super Kryptonian Dragon
Anime & Comics · Ravinder_Singh_807
walking dead reference?
"Although attempts were made by health professionals to conduct even more thorough examinations, they were limited to blood and drug tests due to restrictions imposed by his influential mother."
Besto Furendos In A School Of Sociopaths
Anime & Comics · BurgerNoTomatoes
hmm
As I collapsed into bed each night, exhausted but satisfied, I allowed myself to dream. Not of being a hero, not in the way All Might imagined. But of power. Of control. Of molding this world of quirks and chaos into something... better. A world that would hail me not just as a Symbol of Peace, but as the architect of true societal harmony. A God amongst men.
My Hero Academia: Adaptation
Anime & Comics · TSOKyoto
what game is this?
Precision beats power and timing beats speed.
Demon Slayer : The Silent Journey
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn