It's ALabasta, not ARabasta
Arhhhgg! Reading with the fourth wall broken gives me a headache! And it gets worse with the characters constantly complaining! But it's a great chapter.
This was incredibly stupid, if you look at it from the perspective of someone who knows the universe. But if he was a person who doesn't know things and is actually learning, then it would be a good idea. But, he already knows the story, so why do that? He could just as well stay out of it until he has to save someone and then he can say he read the books somewhere.
This story is amazing. Despite the time jumps and the lack of some scenes that would have been nice to see, this story is easily one of my favorites so far. Keep going, good stories are hard to find these days.
It would be interesting if he showed more emotion when it comes to Ciri. I know he's a bit cold and closed off, but at least for her, he could show more affection.
Thanks for coming back. And please don't give Percy too much prominence. It's not that I hate him. It's just that the protagonist of your story is now your Character.
What does she look like? Having the figure of an actress would be much better to imagine.
Am I the only one disappointed? I was expecting an original wild dragon.
Would it be interesting if Minato saved Nagato's parents or is that just me being crazy? Here's my idea. He saves Nagato's parents and takes them to Uzushiogakure, where the Uzumakis live. In this, he and his team end up helping to defend the country when they are attacked. Sorry. My madness took over.
The story is very good and has a different way of approaching reincarnation. It's not 100% clear if he doesn't remember, if his memories about the world are deteriorating, or if he didn't watch the entire anime. But that doesn't diminish the quality of the story in any way. One of the best Naruto fics I've ever read. Congratulations.
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