the story so far is good, but it's too fast paced. You need to up the creepyness factor with the voidspawn, and the relationships feel a bit rushed just as the interactions do. I'd say have more depth to the interactions between characters and add more of the dark fantasy vibe to it since the world is very corrupt you need to different kinds of corruption that is in the light and in the shadow
Bitch the fuck you expect? You're a fuckin reincarnation novel protagonist
I groaned. Of course. Nothing's ever simple.
My Life as the Villainess’s Butler
Fantasy · Phenom1
it's the ability to summon that's gold not summon itself
On his shoulder, was the small form of Arthur. After Alaric upgraded the bronze ranger guard wolf, to a silver guard wolf, a new ability followed, which allowed the wolf to change its size and also communicate with its master.
Reincarnated as the Baron's son: My Infinite Card Upgrade System
Fantasy · Rion34
Fuck you i ain't gay. But a certain author of a novel about dragons and sorcerers could be.
Ce livre a été supprimé.
this degenerate motherfucker of an author bro😂
"Brother...pervert."
Stop Hypnotizing Me, Antagonist Princess!
Urban · Fish-flavored cheese
and so it starts
[The storyline deviation of the S-level character "Tiya Yohusti" has been raised to 0.50%.]
Stop Hypnotizing Me, Antagonist Princess!
Urban · Fish-flavored cheese
wait what? the fuck is happening here?
If what happened today really got out, ultimately she would be the one punished by His Majesty or even have her scores in the King's Election docked.
Stop Hypnotizing Me, Antagonist Princess!
Urban · Fish-flavored cheese
didn't she have white hair after the incident?
Finally, as the crowd from the matrix slowly parted, a slender woman with black hair came forward.
Stop Hypnotizing Me, Antagonist Princess!
Urban · Fish-flavored cheese
THE OTHER S RANK CHARACTERS
It was as if the divinity and strength of these Order Chains far exceeded those of the other deities in the Pantheon.
Stop Hypnotizing Me, Antagonist Princess!
Urban · Fish-flavored cheese
and the villains, you don't grow attachment to them as you read so it feels like they're barely there just as the main cast, but so far good job :)
My Life as the Villainess’s Butler
Fantasy · Phenom1