DaoistWYboet

DaoistWYboet

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2023-10-31 Joint Global
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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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I loved the story and the ending. it was crafted in a way that didn't seem so sudden like so many of the books on here do. I would love a part 2 though. Does Alla find out who her parents are, Does Mia grow up to be the heiress of her grandparent's families, does Maggie find love. overall I loved the book.

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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am I the only one confused. is this a flash back to the beginning or are these chapters out of place

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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this chapter is also out of place. the other Carter is in prison. is this all a flashback?

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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is this chapter completely out of place or are the names screwed up. Ethan Carter is dead

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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the constant name changes and mixup are really frustrating. also several pieces of this seem out of place and don't flow

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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it was chicken not pizza. the editor really needs to proof this better

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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the mix up of names in this chapter is really confusing

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DaoistWYboet
9 months ago
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again several issues with this chapter, Susan was there when Ethan died. she didn't find out days later

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