Webnovel Author: FirstHokage - Novel Collection

I absolutely love when someone give me advice, so thanks also I know the punctuation mark is a problem, I am going to re release this same book in fan fic section, where I will try to resolve that problem along with some grammatical mistakes, so if you can, please give that one a try as well (same name)

I am sorry I am such a bad writer, can you tell me correct sentence ?

thanks

Name: Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction Rank: S Cost: 60 Upkeep: 20 Type: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Release Range: 70 Meters Speed: 400 Power: 450 Handseals: Rat → Ox → Dog → Horse → Monkey → Boar → Tiger Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the user's body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames that can set a vast area ablaze, engulfing the target in a veritable sea of flames. If used upon dense, combustible terrain such as a forest, the confined area can greatly increase the possibility of the target's incineration. Unlike the Fire Release: Great Fire Annihilation, which focuses on a widespread area, this technique focuses on a single spot to focus and maximise its power. I got these two swapped in my mind 😅😅

S rank fire jutsu

because in childhood there isn't large difference between a normal and clan ninja, the difference arises when they grow up, in later part of the story the difference became increasingly apparent

I am at 180th chapter and she only have chunin level strength, how can you call that over powered, 😅

Naruto didn't knew many things buddy 😅

As a child there is not a huge amount of difference in clan children and civilian ninjas for example Sakura was able to keep up with Naruto and Sasuke strength a little when they were 13 year old

umm it was 5, sorry if I wrote 4 at some places 🥲

rinnegan is not the only source of power in Naruto universe, you could continue to read the story and find out how many things can even make a rinnegan a tough fight ☺️

Because this make something called a reason for cheat like abilities of MC😅😅😅

he will learn many things from him 😉