“In poker, as in life, you can win with any hand.”
2023-10-07 Joint Global
Where was this hostility when he was admiring her beauty and his heart was thumping?
"I'm no project, madam crimson wear! My name is Adam! Simple, A-D-A-M!" Adam's response was quite harsh, displaying a little of his natural hostility towards the people who locked him in here for experimental purposes.
Fantasy · Xavier_DALOONWARR
650?! This world record level kind of weight, She strong asf
A few of the contestants were eliminated in the second round, and when Megan's turn came back up, she ended up squatting 650 pounds, although it was not easy for her.
Fantasy · CaracasM
Ngl this is pretty low for the heaviest, Its about what, 45kg?
"I see. So, I choose a weight…" the warlock muttered, inserting the metal pipe into the heaviest weight possible, which marked 100 pounds.
Fantasy · CaracasM
Is this meant to be, it was for Zac?
Remembering the story about him being from a poor family, he understood that his friend didn't have the money to spend on frivolous things—and while ice cream wasn't exactly a luxury item, it was for Dante.
Fantasy · CaracasM
'Sh-she remembered my name!' Zac thought, mesmerized at Victoria's beauty and demeanor.
Fantasy · CaracasM
Sophia smiled as the lightbulb atop her head lit up with an idea. "Then that settles our plans for this weekend. Let's have a movie marathon!" she exclaimed, holding the warlock's arm from excitement.
Fantasy · CaracasM
Amazing, This makes two beauties now that are blushin…I can smell the harem
"I'll be under your care for some time, so I'll help out with anything I can," he replied with a smile, making Camille blush slightly at his unapparent gentleness.
Fantasy · CaracasM
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 5 Megan Dunlap
Fantasy · CaracasM
kelvar... what r u doin here
Ember Thaddeus
Fantasy · Holomez
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Fate's cruelty.
Fantasy · Zero_Things
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Fate's cruelty.
Fantasy · Zero_Things
I guess I shouldve made it clearer, but killing him would taken more than half of his remaining spiritual energy, which he wasn't willing to give up. Having super low energy wouldve been risky as silas and juexin were still there. Killing emeber just wasnt worth that risk,
ch 50 Golden
Fantasy · Holomez
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 223 Maria's Ready *R18
Action · Anaesthetic_Dawn
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 223 Maria's Ready *R18
Action · Anaesthetic_Dawn
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 David Graham
Games · AstridStorm
Interesting first chapter. And this is just my personal opinion but there’s a few things I feel, could be worked on. —Info dumps, honestly there’s too much information being given here, specially from the get go where the reader hasn’t fully connected with hera yet, I don’t even know if I like hera yet and already I’m being told her whole family heritage lol. I think it’s be better for the info to be sprinkled along multiple chaps, where it’s relevant. —the switch to second person was jarring, it works well in visual and audio mediums where there’s a hidden narrator telling the viewer about the story but in word form it’s harder to execute. —you often jump from past tense to present tense and versa which I found to be jarring, I’d say keep to one tense, and preferable past tense as that seems to be more prevalent on here. —punctuation could use a few touches I think, missing commas. But yeah very nice first chapter, it was enjoyable [img=recommend]
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 Hera Avery
The Return of the Cannon Fodder Trillion Heiress
Urban · GoddessKM