This is my first story so i am learning as i go along, do hope my later chapter a broken up enough so i hope you enjoy it if you have any more advice, please let me know. Thank you
"What are you saying?, we have been together for three years Susan how can you say that" Susan no longer felt the need to keep talking decided to say" I don't care John you can't buy me the things that I want. Look at this Necklace it worth more then your pathetic poor life." John's Being completely heartbroken stared at the woman he loved saying " I thought my love would be enough for you but you would rather throw me away for what, a stupid necklace, I don't believe it"
The Super Rich Harem System
Fantasy · Brooke_Dunlop_7788
Thank you for your advice i will try better
I have Fixed it thank you for bringing it to my attention
Sorry i didn't write it in the story i had it in some notes i wrote 100 points is 5% status upgrade
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original The Super Rich Harem System
21-year-old John Walker, Super smart, Poor and unlucky in love until he received the super-rich harem system. Now he had Money and is surround by love of both men and women. The System help open his Heart and soul. So, he will be able to find what he has always wanted True Love153 Chs 182 Collections
i am sorry to hear that but thank you for giving it a go anyway.
John was not really surprised that he had attracted a potential Male Partner as he had on occasion been attracted to men. He just never had the opportunity to explore that side of himself.
The Super Rich Harem System
Fantasy · Brooke_Dunlop_7788