Epicenter_of_Chaos

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2023-08-30 Joint Global
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3 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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3 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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3 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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3 months ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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4 months ago
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You should describe the side characters more to make the novel more immersive, you didn't introduce the characters of mc mother and father much neither any of his clan mates, and da*m the time skips.

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4 months ago
Commented

from 8man pair pov: ichinose- failure of a leader in a meritocracy academy, worst one to be with him as a fml and would make hikigaya less evil and you would repeat oregairu later season 8man. only reason i would also like her is due to her potential to devloping into a yandere archtype. but again, if she is a fml, ryuen and arisu will undoubtedly cripple her and it would be a nuisance for 8man. arisu- logically best pick if you ignore her being a loli (i am a booba enjoyer so this is rough). she is sadist and want to be the best and defeat kiyo. both can mutually benifit each other and since arisu is rich due to her background, he can have a relatively easy life. hiyori- she a book lover so great pair for 8man. she is wholesome sweet angel, way too good for 'evil' hikigaya but i can figure she be a fan favorite for the most part. horikita- well she is a bish but you can chara devlop her and make her a better person if you can bridge the gap between her and president. she can potentially be a good fml if done right. class d or b sensei- i mean you know your taste if you want her so nothing more to say. Kiryuin- she is hot, need i say more? kei- She is kiyotaka pawn, so not worth it.

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5 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chap