well bro, it was my first story and i also pretty much not satisfied with it.
that's why i wrote My Hero Academia: Legacy of Lost Numbers, try that and hope you will like it.
Thank you for reading until now brother, your support really meant a lot to me.
If possible please let me know your thoughts about the story as I'm planning to end the story within 10-15 chapters
actually I don't think son should follow the same path as his father did he should find his own path, I'm sorry for this funky plot but I will work hard and improve.
In a world where heroes and Magic are celebrated, the children of Deku, Bakugo, and Shoto face a devastating loss when their past catches up with them. After a catastrophic experiment by the League of Villains leaves them powerless and forgotten, the once-promising heroes must confront their lost identities. Toshinori, a formidable figure with no memory of his past, emerges as a central force in their struggle. As he grapples with his own mysterious origins, he becomes a pivotal character in the battle to reclaim their lives and redefine their futures.
In "The Dark Guardian" we follow the journey of a young man named Dabao, who mysteriously disappeared for five years, only to return with a newfound identity as Lou.
As Dabao navigates the complexities of his altered life, he grapples with his secret identity as Raven, a vigilante with cybernetic enhancements and meta-human abilities.
Alongside his friends, including Hanyu, Xubao, and Su Han, Dabao confronts the challenges of his dual existence, balancing his desire to protect his loved ones with the need to maintain his secrecy.
As he faces formidable foes like Octo, a fellow meta-human, Dabao's past and present collide, revealing a web of secrets and alliances that will shape his destiny. With each encounter, Dabao must confront his inner demons and forge a path towards redemption, all while navigating the perilous landscape of a world teeming with meta-humans, titans, and predators.
Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted, this is the story of Naruto the Military Commando.
In my story, his son, Aqua Hoshino, differs from the original Oshi No Ko character. I wasn't fond of how Aqua toyed with Akane and Kana's hearts, so I created him to be the son that Naruto truly deserves. I hope you enjoy my narrative.
This is the Fan-made story of My hero Academia universe where the story begins from deku's son toshinori midoriya who was qwerkless as him, it's not the story of qwerkless boy who gain power and achieved his dream but the story of a boy who lost his dream and prove everyone.
In "Hidden Fighters" the main character, Amane Fujimiya, is a man of mystery with a hidden past. A former legend in the world of martial arts and the enigmatic first generation legend, Amane has disappeared from society, leaving behind his friends, family, and a shattered love story with Mihuru Shinra, the woman he still secretly adores.
Years later, Amane's estranged son, Izumi who embarks on a quest to uncover the truth about his father's disappearance and his own roots. Along the way, he encounters a powerful mentor, Fuji Shikimori, who trains him in martial arts and reveals the existence of a hidden world of legends and demons.
As Izumi delves deeper into this world, he learns that his father, Amane, is not only alive but also a key player in the enigmatic Hidden Fighters. The story unfolds with secrets, betrayals, and a complex web of relationships that tie together Amane, Mihuru, Izumi, and their friends.
Amane's journey to protect Mihuru from the shadows, his rivalry with the enigmatic legendary Demon, and Izumi's quest for answers set the stage for a thrilling tale of martial arts, hidden identities, and the enduring power of love and family bonds. As father and son reunite to confront their past, the legend of the Demon's Return reaches its epic climax, revealing shocking truths and challenging the characters' perceptions of good and evil.
"Hidden Fighters" is a gripping story of redemption, forgiveness, and the relentless pursuit of love and justice, where the legacy of legends lives on, and the power of the human spirit shines brightly even in the darkest of times.
It was all dark i don't know what happened to me I was feeling like I was surrounded by some dark aura but when I opened my eyes I was shocked that I've been reincarnated into the novel that i read once I was shocked and was terrified a little because the character I've reincarnated was just a a guy who doesn't have much role in this novel and died at the beginning of main story.
well bro, it was my first story and i also pretty much not satisfied with it. that's why i wrote My Hero Academia: Legacy of Lost Numbers, try that and hope you will like it.
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