Interesante fanfic
very good idea of changing worlds since the previous one showed that the important things to do were over, a chapter where MC arrives in Danmachi and meets the girls from the Fertility Bar would still be good
Naruto, como un huérfano muerto de hambre en las calles :v
Ce livre a été supprimé.
Silver could have used one of his plasmids that can control wind or ideal fluids to create a liquid repulsion layer or Silver simply didn't do it because he was limited to the amount of plasmids he could still use or the corrosion is too strong.
El que cosa de que ?
So, when Silver levels up and modifies his body, wouldn't it be better to ask Miach to prepare a very strong supplement for him that has all the vitamins and minerals so that he can work better? Regarding armor, it's just a suggestion, nothing more, but it would be a good idea to have armor with rectangular plates made of rare metals attached to a suit in vital places on the body and thus offer protection without interfering with mobility. This is just an example of what I'm talking about.
No te preocupes akikan sabemos que estás mal desde hace mucho tiempo 👍
La historia es buena, algunos no les agradara algunas cosas pero ya queda a criterio de cada uno y sería recomendable ignorar dichos capitulos
I think you should develop Peter and Gwen's relationship more until more characters are introduced.
26 de septiembre de 2024, sin novedades del autor tengo la teoría que algo me sucedió:'v
Danmachi: Reborn with EMIYA's Powers
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