Pixxie_Mysteria999

Pixxie_Mysteria999

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
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This story is quite interesting for me to read and I quite liked it. The only problems I have with it are the grammar; everything else is great and keep up with a good work.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
Commented

This is such a sad chapter but a great one at best, so keep with a good work.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
Commented

These three sentences need to be eliminated, and the second one needs to be rewritten as "You'll see for yourself."

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
Commented

These two sentences should be eliminated.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
Commented

Replace exclamation mark with question mark.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
8 months ago
Commented

Italics, not quotation marks.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
9 months ago
Commented

Another great chapter.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
Pixxie_Mysteria999
9 months ago
Commented

The next two dialogues needs to be together.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
9 months ago
Commented

All three dialogues needs to be combined in one.

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Pixxie_Mysteria999
9 months ago
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Space

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    Pagis

    Fantasy

    Reincarnated in a mysterious, medieval fantasy world, Mara woke up in the middle of nowhere and struggled to find her way out of there, until she encountered an old lady. Once she received directions from the woman, she was excited to arrive there. As soon as she made it there, she found out there was a trap in that town and now planned to escape from it, facing danger along the way as a defenseless woman. How will she be able to accomplish her goal? Will she even survive it to the end during her flight? I will be posting this story on Royal Road.

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  • The Tale of Mysteria original

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    29 Chs 8 Collections

  • Aniva original

    Aniva

    Fantasy

    Eighteen-year-old Dilara served as the sole maid in a mansion for her cruel sisters and Mother, as she never got a chance to explore her life besides work. Tired of her misery, she begins to go on a quest to defeat the dark lord and save the galaxy of Aniva after her kingdom was nearly destroyed and her family was in danger. How will she ever defeat the dark lord when fate's preventing her from doing so though?

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  • Nocturnal Flight original

    Nocturnal Flight

    Teen MAGIC DARK

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