MegMerrilies

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Like most writers, I wrote in my youth. My first story involved a lot of snappy one-liners about a guy named Jack. I never fancied myself a writer.

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Out to where my friend was, out to where my home and family were.

Breaching the veil between the temple and the dense forest, I saw that the moon hung low over its outline. I stumbled over a root, my knees hitting the ground their flesh pierced by a rock. My breath ragged. I was out. I cast a frantic glance around realizing everyone had gone home. 

FATED FOLLY

FATED FOLLY

Fantasia · MegMerrilies

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MegMerrilies
1 days ago
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Insert scene...

The man approached, bowing slightly. "It seems I owe you my life."

FATED FOLLY

FATED FOLLY

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1 days ago
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drawn back to a time.

I touched the hairpin that graced my hair, drawing back to when my mother first told me the story of the pin. 

FATED FOLLY

FATED FOLLY

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9 days ago
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fell

She wasn't there with me then, so I scrapped that thought. Maybe it happened when she and another cousin were visiting. Lorne and I were roughhousing in the trailer in defiance of the rule that there would be none. For a good reason, too, seeing how the door I was pushed up against swung open. I felt out the back door, pitched forward and cracked my head on two of the three metal stairs that led out to the area where my grandmother used to toss the contents of the ten-gallon pail we used to use as a makeshift toilet. I can still recall the stench.

Our Last Christmas

Our Last Christmas

Urbano · S.E. Saunders

MegMerrilies
MegMerrilies
10 days ago
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No just.

He was chained, his skin marred with blood and fecal matter. Upon his face an unreadable expression. No anger, or suspicion. Just the face of a man who had forgotten hope. 

FATED FOLLY

FATED FOLLY

Fantasia · MegMerrilies

MegMerrilies
MegMerrilies
10 days ago
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Clean up quotes, make it make sense.

"I'll sleep at night. Will you?" I shot back, gripping the pin tighter. "He'd need to pry it from my cold dead hand."

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FATED FOLLY

Fantasia · MegMerrilies

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MegMerrilies
12 days ago
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clutched her... ?

Winter clutched her, feeling nervous and scared. She didn't know what people would think of her. It had been a year since she last visited the office, and she wasn't sure if anyone would recognize her.

Madam Wants To Divorce Her Second Husband

Madam Wants To Divorce Her Second Husband

Urbano · ForeverPupa

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12 days ago
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I'm immediately liking where this is going.

"I said, keep addressing me as Madam. You can call me Madam Winter, but I don't want you to call me wife or darling. We're not close enough to do that."

Madam Wants To Divorce Her Second Husband

Madam Wants To Divorce Her Second Husband

Urbano · ForeverPupa

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MegMerrilies
18 days ago
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Expand for transition to next thought to move plot along.

I touched the hairpin that graced my hair, drawing back to when my mother first told me the story of the pin. 

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FATED FOLLY

Fantasia · MegMerrilies

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    In this novel the protagonist, the daughter of a mafia Don, finds herself in a complicated situation following her father's death. Despite her family's expectations for her to inherit the family business, she is determined to break away from the disgraceful legacy of crime her father built. She decides to leverage her syndicate connections to help those who want to escape the criminal path, providing support and incentives for reform. However, she must be cautious not to reveal her true intentions, as a power shift within the organization could make her a target. The protagonist sets the stage for her transformation into a powerful focus in the criminal world while hinting at her plans to bring about change and reform within the organization.

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