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Please don’t give up on this novel it’s great the writing quality is soooo sweet i just cloud not stop myself from reading It all day if i have compling it will be that one of the chapters tilte spoler the whole ‘Mystery diseases’ given the disease full name on chapter titles....

The MC hide his strength for made up resone for very looooooooong time he even left someone close to him to die for no reason all he had to is to lock this person for some time until the threat is gone no fighting or anything just hide this person for some time maybe a day or two nothing more but noooo this person must die before the MC is pathetic coward

Yet another novel ruined by the author/viewer porn addiction seriously a sexual relationship between the MC and his fiancee mother?!!! Just why ?!! it completely ruined the whole MC character alone with the novel , - it was supposed to be a novel about stranger in strange land poor kid trying to befriend the original character from the novel he loved, Enjoying his time while fully aware that this is not his body and will give if back soon, - I like that part very much yet you successfully ruined it was as if you re-write the whole novel tweak some settings to make her story so important to the plot she clearly wasn’t meant to be anything aside from background character yet you change that now، - her existence destroys everything the MC just so Obsessed with her and she into it punching him to be obsessed with her even more, - she’s you fiancee mother first you care taker second yet no one to speak about them as if nothing had happened except for the finance of course poor girl what are you going to do if the author/viewers were into this shit? Nothing you will always be the villain yet you will be the hero in my eyes this novel is beyond saving it this point

A wonderful novel, but please be realistic. How can a monster with an uncommon class survive being chased by people much stronger than her for a very long time? Just make her evolve into a rare class immediately and please do not do that again. - I mean by that, there is a little period between her evolve in the novel from the perspective of the characters, but from Readers' perspective: It took 800 chapters and we have not seen her evolve to Rare class yet, and this just rare class imagine something beyond Rare ? It will be nightmare. it this point we will not see her evolve even after 3000 chapters at your current pace, and this is not good. She were supposed to reach that rare class in the festival and fight everyone with her new strength, even if she lose, I do not care I just wanted to see her strength after she evolved to Rare class , but you stupidly end the Festival before she evolved to rare without any reason to do so despite you hint for it : - tell me what is the point of making her evolution available before level 40 in Fox Festival if she didn’t evolved to rare even after reaching level 39 ? You made me excited over nothing. F*** you all of the excitement for fox festival acr was for nothing in the end what waste of chapters

A system ?? Why the f*** do you need a system ? Isn’t enough that you steal the other hard work ? no you have to give the ‘side character’ a system with shop !!! That Pathetic drop