being perfectly fluent in 1 language in 1 year is an impressive achievement. 10 languages is insane. That's one every 36 days.
In my previous world it took me a year to perfectly become fluent in 10 languages but what about now?
Clearing The World That's Inside A Novel
Fantasy · kxixrxixtxo
I'm going to buy privilege so that I can read the rest of this fight. He BETTER win.
says the man sacrificing children
You just barged in here and ruined it all. Do you have some fucking shame?"
Black String of Fate
Fantasy · Audatic
Author, what is your discord? the link in the description doesn't work.
no such thing as a Saintess. It's just Saint. Saint is unisex (like Saint Mary Magdalene).
Priests, paladins, nun, monks, saints, saintesses, and any other religion-related professions were a special category of Pathwalkers. They did not gain power through practice and experience, but rather through prayers and devotion to certain Gods. While many small religions existed in the world, the main and the most popular one was of the Goddess of Faith. The church, which was the biggest organization of the Goddess, was one of the hegemon powers of the world.
Black String of Fate
Fantasy · Audatic
does not need to be this long.
The foundational arts created by a regressed genius who had achieved the greatest mastery of his old arts. Combines the Foundational Sword Techniques of the First Swordsman, The Four Basic Sword Stances, Guide to Heavy Swords, Basic Light Sword Arts, and Sixth Sword Sense. This art encompasses and balances all the basic stars of the warrior, making it the sole art that specializes in all the stars of the warrior path.
Black String of Fate
Fantasy · Audatic
stupid name. that sounds awful. why not just something like "Ultimate Foundation Arts"? It's simple and unpretentious, looks and sounds good, and describes exactly what it is; an ultimate art that surpasses all others of its kind. Alternatively, Absolute Foundation Arts, Complete Foundation Arts, Supreme Foundation Arts, or Perfected Foundation Arts.
Limitless Ascension Foundational Arts.'
Black String of Fate
Fantasy · Audatic
...he just destroyed all of his skills? what?
...obviously they will.
Rest assured, I won't go out of my way to oppose you, but I also won't become your steadfast ally. If the invaders mess with me... Well, we will see then."
Black String of Fate
Fantasy · Audatic
not a bad start, but you should have taken more time with it, to establish the climate.
Aetheric Chronicles: Reborn As An Extra
Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos