Yaoigobbler

Yaoigobbler

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2023-06-12 Joint Indonesia
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Yaoigobbler
Yaoigobbler
1 years ago
Replied to Burningnova13

Hello, I really appreciate this elaborate and touching comment!! I can tell you’re very passionate about story writing :)

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Yaoigobbler
Yaoigobbler
1 years ago
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Your Grammar is immaculate I have to say... But I do feel like you're depicting all of your characters to be very optimistic, it feels sorta one-dimensional. Maybe I have to continue reading the next chapters to see more diversity and development, but overall you have a solid story! Keep it up :)

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Yaoigobbler
Yaoigobbler
1 years ago
Replied to Sanskriti_patel

I’m glad you enjoyed my story :)))

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