There's something in common, can't argue
It seems this is even better than I expected! I'll be able to fight in close combat using my own skills and then repeat the effect of each strike, simultaneously breaking the opponent's rhythm and smashing through any block! And if I have time to prepare on the battlefield, where there are walls, trees, asphalt, and lamp posts that so love to fall on villains... I won't just beat my classmates; I'll overpower even the pros!
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Yui and S... are not just side characters; they are important to the story and needed to be treated with care. Throughout chapters 7-2 to 7-8, S... dramatically evolves as a person, and I needed to show both her talent and the immense heaviness of their training. If that's not a plot to you, I’m not sure what you consider to be one. Besides, you were warned about the pacing at the beginning of the book.
You can definitely cross out 1 and 2. As for 3, I never add words just for the sake of it, but people are different, and some might not like the pacing.
But to get there, you should also enjoy my usual, turtle-like, non-action-packed writing.
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It will happen eventually, but not in the first volume.
The last thing I remember is watching the fifth season of "My Hero Academia." I liked the first three; the other two were so-so. Or maybe I just couldn't see clearly because my health worsened, my vision failed, and I kept falling into some sort of abyss...
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how...
I don't know what kind of amazing movements the explosive blond Bakugo, likely one of my future classmates, has, but if he mastered a similar "flight"—that is, in the anime, he literally flies using explosions from his hands—he has my respect. He must've been training since childhood too.
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yep
After I put the container back in place, Yui clasped her hands together as if she were about to wish me a good meal (Author's note: "Itadakimasu!"), and said:
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He will stop worrying about it, indeed. However, you don't seem to take his character into account: he is a perfectionist who pushes himself to achieve the best possible result in every important area, with no mistakes allowed. So, he is just worried about making a mistake, and that's it.
Thinking this way, I resumed my search for a dojo, but this time, instead of looking for just any training base, I specifically sought out characters I was familiar with from the anime. Some of the UA students must have been training somewhere before enrolling. Many of them already knew martial arts during the entrance exams. For example, that guy with the drills for hands. Or that funny dude with the big tail from Class 1-A…
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yes, dark hair
And she was also a brunette, yes.
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And here I am, working on a second fic set in the Naruto universe :)
But, besides all that, dyed blonde hair among Japanese people is traditionally associated with hooligan, rude, and tsundere behavior.
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Awakening won't happen soon :)
It was difficult. Really difficult because it's one thing to constantly concentrate on one or two points, especially in familiar surroundings, and quite another – on six! And especially in a fight... where you set these "markers" in real-time... and when they are constantly changing, being used in new places and different points...
MHA: Thorny Path of a Pro-Hero
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