The main story itself is very intriguing. It's like a roller coaster of emotional action suspense and exictment. I had to take time to read through the sentences carefully to fully get a grasp of the story and it's worth it
It's quite captivating
It's very touching poetry
This has really captured my interestthe authors flow of ideas is really easy to follow. It's quite the touching story thus far. I recommend it, definitely absolutely touching story.
Im happy that you read my book I feel encouraged to keep on writing. More chapters are on the way
There are rouge security machines roaming about (spoiler warning)
"crew prepare ship for landing, get your Harzard gear ready double check weapons have the drones scout the dead ocean and find that signal if this goes well, it's big pay day for everyone with extra bounses."
Frozen awakening
Fantasy · Ralph_Fourie
Teen romance, it's all about young love here. I love your design of the character Cassandra Your story development is really good and easy to follow The way you put à separate paet for the characters thoughts is excellent
It's very intriguing
The haunted house it's getting exciting 👻👻
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original Digi-malise-Online: invasion of the hero
Digi-malise-Online launched a Virtual reality game that brings fantasy to reality.Many players from around the world compete to become the best champion in the league of heros contest. Recently a string of incidents where players would suddenly lose consciousness and be traped in game have been on the rise since the implementation of a new full dive device. Zamsoft the company responsibe for managing the servers hires expert programers and private investigators and veteran players mwiza and Banda to solve the issue however little do they know that Once the game is booted they are sent to another world instead of the game they know2 Chs 2 Collections
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Frozen awakening
4.51
"We found something that looks like it can make us some big dough in the waste lands of a forgotten world it's cold to the touch, wait something or someone is in that thing could it be the original inhabitants of te'gra ? or something else entirely."mirai tanya captain of the scavengers was sent with her crew to ter'gra a planet whose entire civilisation wiped by unknown forces,she being one of the surviving decendents of hopes to uncover the truth and any other survivors But what she and her crew found on ter'gra was a being whose very existence could forever change their lives and the universe.14 Chs 24 Collections
I love the intro
"No Neuralink divergence, no increase in the neural charge either. No fever or increased heart rate... But I'm not surprised." Dr. Amanda Hall said, lifting her dark eyes from the board, a small smile on her face.
Theryon System: ENGAGED
Sci-fi · XanaTrygg