Arcturus_Sirius

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2023-05-08 Joint Global
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Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
17 days ago
Replied to Arcturus_Sirius

I decided to check the chapter before the lock, and it seems the writing has gotten significantly better.

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
17 days ago
Posted

The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
18 days ago
Commented

As to why he never paid attention or rather why he can't is because he simply doesn't have the time for it.*

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
18 days ago
Commented

There should be a space after the period and comma, and the sentence describing his hair and eyes should be 'was a bit on the handsome side'

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
1 months ago
Replied to tercel98

you mean a bident

While Amelia thought of the 'most prized possession' as a marriage with her mother and her, in truth, the Queen and Neo would talk about the weapon.

Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

Extra's Death: I Am the Son of Hades

Fantasy · FailedWriter101

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
3 months ago
Replied to Faulty_Wiring

tap and hold the comment if your on mobile and it should show a dislike option

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
1 years ago
Commented

maybe find the 'u' and the 'e' in Prologue

If this is a scenario, then there must be some kind of objective that they have to complete to finish this Prolog.

Entering Apocalypse in Easy-Mode

Entering Apocalypse in Easy-Mode

Fantasy · Diyen_Pi

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
1 years ago
Replied to DAMM_SCHOOL

nah, she seems smart if she can figure this out

The girl narrowed her eyes. 'There's no way that sword was picked up on the street.'

Entering Apocalypse in Easy-Mode

Entering Apocalypse in Easy-Mode

Fantasy · Diyen_Pi

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
1 years ago
Commented

didn't Daphne say that there was a artifacts that could locate her when she was 14 years old, so it would've been useless if she didn't remember or stayed there

Miller and his daughter were gone. Maybe even Clarice and Evelyn and their team too. And in a way, he was the cause for all of it. If he didn't let Daphne become an Aura Knight, she wouldn't realize that she was a Whitmore. They wouldn't have found out. And the 70000 people there would have been alive.

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

I Just Inherited The Arcane Emperor's Legacy

Fantasy · WhiteNightingale

Arcturus_Sirius
Arcturus_Sirius
1 years ago
Commented

this isn't punishment for them, it's punishment for the people who run the place unless they're masochistic