The writing quality, at least for the first few chapters, is bad. Sometimes, the author doesn't put spaces after a period or comma. There are either words that are unnecessary or missing in a sentence, and the I aren't capitalized most of the time. Overall, the grammar isn't that. Though the plot seems interesting.
As to why he never paid attention or rather why he can't is because he simply doesn't have the time for it.*
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Fantasy · The_Eminence1326
There should be a space after the period and comma, and the sentence describing his hair and eyes should be 'was a bit on the handsome side'
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Fantasy · The_Eminence1326
you mean a bident
While Amelia thought of the 'most prized possession' as a marriage with her mother and her, in truth, the Queen and Neo would talk about the weapon.
Fantasy · FailedWriter101
tap and hold the comment if your on mobile and it should show a dislike option
maybe find the 'u' and the 'e' in Prologue
If this is a scenario, then there must be some kind of objective that they have to complete to finish this Prolog.
Fantasy · Diyen_Pi
nah, she seems smart if she can figure this out
The girl narrowed her eyes. 'There's no way that sword was picked up on the street.'
Fantasy · Diyen_Pi
didn't Daphne say that there was a artifacts that could locate her when she was 14 years old, so it would've been useless if she didn't remember or stayed there
Miller and his daughter were gone. Maybe even Clarice and Evelyn and their team too. And in a way, he was the cause for all of it. If he didn't let Daphne become an Aura Knight, she wouldn't realize that she was a Whitmore. They wouldn't have found out. And the 70000 people there would have been alive.
Fantasy · WhiteNightingale
this isn't punishment for them, it's punishment for the people who run the place unless they're masochistic
"Harder!~ Harder!~"
Fantasy · Ryukurou
I decided to check the chapter before the lock, and it seems the writing has gotten significantly better.
Academy's Extra:The APEX LEGACY
Fantasy · The_Eminence1326